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LuckyCharms

(17,425 posts) Tue Jan 8, 2019, 11:35 PM Jan 2019

I'm not very creative, but I wrote a poem I think is pretty good. Here it is:

Roses are ...wait
Hey Trump......FUUUUUUUCK YOUUUUUU

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I'm not very creative, but I wrote a poem I think is pretty good. Here it is: (Original Post) LuckyCharms Jan 2019 OP

Brilliant. MontanaMama Jan 2019 #1

Is your poem a Haiku-fu? MLAA Jan 2019 #2

That works for me. Ohiogal Jan 2019 #3

Is your anthology available on Amazon? diva77 Jan 2019 #4

Epsom salt is an anagram for last poems... Harker Jan 2019 #5

Your poetry has moved me to tears... just beautiful. Marie Marie Jan 2019 #6

As one who spent most of my working days in bookshops... Harker Jan 2019 #8

I see a Pulitzer in your future, LC. nt Laffy Kat Jan 2019 #7

Ogden Nash might have put it this way: DFW Jan 2019 #9

Well, it's not quite the Man from Nantucket, is it? n/t Ron Obvious Jan 2019 #10

Buahahaha Smickey Jan 2019 #11

Not to be overly critical, but to be truly great, a poem ... JustABozoOnThisBus Jan 2019 #12

MontanaMama

(23,307 posts)

1. Brilliant.

Reply to LuckyCharms (Original post)

Tue Jan 8, 2019, 11:38 PM

Jan 2019

+1.

MLAA

(17,282 posts)

2. Is your poem a Haiku-fu?

Reply to LuckyCharms (Original post)

Tue Jan 8, 2019, 11:42 PM

Jan 2019

Ohiogal

(31,979 posts)

3. That works for me.

Reply to LuckyCharms (Original post)

Tue Jan 8, 2019, 11:50 PM

Jan 2019

diva77

(7,640 posts)

4. Is your anthology available on Amazon?

Reply to LuckyCharms (Original post)

Wed Jan 9, 2019, 12:01 AM

Jan 2019

Harker

(14,012 posts)

5. Epsom salt is an anagram for last poems...

Reply to LuckyCharms (Original post)

Wed Jan 9, 2019, 12:24 AM

Jan 2019

should there be plans for a posthumous collection of late works.

Marie Marie

(9,999 posts)

6. Your poetry has moved me to tears... just beautiful.

Reply to LuckyCharms (Original post)

Wed Jan 9, 2019, 12:37 AM

Jan 2019

Harker

(14,012 posts)

8. As one who spent most of my working days in bookshops...

Reply to Marie Marie (Reply #6)

Wed Jan 9, 2019, 09:15 AM

Jan 2019

I cried a little bit, too.

Laffy Kat

(16,377 posts)

7. I see a Pulitzer in your future, LC. nt

Reply to LuckyCharms (Original post)

Wed Jan 9, 2019, 02:11 AM

Jan 2019

DFW

(54,343 posts)

9. Ogden Nash might have put it this way:

Reply to LuckyCharms (Original post)

Wed Jan 9, 2019, 10:27 PM

Jan 2019

God in his wisdom made Donald Trump,
And said, „WTF? That‘s not Forrest Gump?!“

Ron Obvious

(6,261 posts)

10. Well, it's not quite the Man from Nantucket, is it? n/t

Reply to LuckyCharms (Original post)

Wed Jan 9, 2019, 11:25 PM

Jan 2019

Smickey

(3,316 posts)

11. Buahahaha

Reply to LuckyCharms (Original post)

Thu Jan 10, 2019, 03:17 PM

Jan 2019

Thanks, first real laugh of the day.

JustABozoOnThisBus

(23,338 posts)

12. Not to be overly critical, but to be truly great, a poem ...

Reply to LuckyCharms (Original post)

Thu Jan 10, 2019, 03:33 PM

Jan 2019

... has to mention "Nantucket".

For example, a haiku:

Nantucket roses
Thorny little beastie plants
Hey Trump, just FUUUUUCK YOUUUUU!

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