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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-10-03 08:55 AM
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Story Wars II
Back in May, I had an article on the DU front page about why the Republicans were getting away with their lies and bullshit about what was going on in Iraq:

http://www.democraticunderground.com/articles/03/05/13_story.html

My basic idea was that they had constructed a compelling story and convinced all the major media outlets to tell it, and that this story was now so powerful that the fact that it was fiction would never really matter...unless the story itself started to unravel. I identified 4 sort of narrative weaknesses that might cause that to happen: 1) characterization 2) closure 3) continuity and 4) identification.

And you know what? Since May, the Rovian story has been falling apart on all four fronts:

1) Characterization. From the moment Bush said "Bring 'em on," the characterization of Bush as gunslinging vigilante cowboy became a liability instead of an asset. The statement was 'in character,' or at least in the character they had constructed for him; but it was also obviously, boneheadedly stupid. Since then, that character has been getting markedly less sympathetic as it becomes clearer that he will not be able to rise to the challenges presented to him by the plot. The other night's speech was an even worse moment for Bush's characterization; cowboys don't go around begging for $87 billion, nor do they need an international peacekeeping force to take care of the black hats.

2) Closure. This is the biggie; in my opinion it was the loose thread that started the whole unraveling. Rove tried to end the story before it was over. That "Mission Accomplished" banner is starting to seem more like an ironic joke with every passing day. In fact, his appeal to story logic has--as some here predicted--backfired in a spectacular way because it gave people a benchmark. Operation Iraqi Freedom I may have ended on that aircraft carrier; but Operation Iraqi Freedom II: The Occupation From Hell opened the same night, and the sequel is bombing, as sequels so often do. All the good stuff happened in the first movie; this thing is just the same crap we've seen before only somehow it is just not as entertaining--plus it's much bloodier.

3) Continuity. Man, where does one begin. First of all, the WMDs. They built that whole subplot up like crazy and it turns out to go NOWHERE. Second, the 'liberation.' OK, how is it that people were welcoming us with flowers one minute and then welcoming us with land mines, homemade bombs, RPGs and grenades the next? That doesn't make any sense. And finally, the U.N. We didn't need the U.N. The U.N. was "irrelevant." We were gonna go it alone. Remember? What the hell happened?

4) Identification. On this one, the story is: It's the economy, stupid. As more Americans feel the sting of this recession, the President's penchant for month-long vacations starts to make him a lot less sympathetic. Then again, there's the fixation on tax cuts, which is wearing a little thin for people whose incomes will not be taxed because they do not exist. As his lack of concern for ordinary working Americans becomes ever more clear, the readers are losing their ability to identify with him. You could see that on the faces of those construction workers in the audience at Bush's labor day stop in Ohio. "Who is this clown and how long do I have to pretend I don't want to rip his head off?"

So the story is falling apart. We're in a story vaccuum right now. Now is the time, people! Seize the day! We need to get our own story up and running while we can still sell it!

C ya,

The Plaid Adder
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bryant69 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-10-03 09:03 AM
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1. What I favor
Is a screwball comedy. Did any of you see Bringing up Baby? Wouldn't President Bush be perfect as the dumb but assured cop who Katherine Hepburn talks rings around by confessing to being a master criminal?

Bryant
Check it out --> http://politicalcomment.blogspot.com
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Mandate My Ass Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-10-03 09:10 AM
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2. The Iraqis obviously didn't get the WH script
they're performing "Infidel, Go Home."
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moosedog Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-10-03 09:16 AM
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3. I agree..
This outfit isn't as smart as they think they are. Cunning and sneaky isn't smart. In the long run, they will fall. The only problem... is the people that do nothing. If enough people can't work and have the time to think about something of importance going on in the world, then, and only then, will the thugs be brought to justice. Everyone can do something to stop them. Even if we are dissagreeing with our loved ones, we just have to. I am nice about it and use tact and try not to hurt anyone, but I do speak out when it is appropiate. We can also show a lot of love and understanding to our fellow Americans. This is just my opinion on what I can do...Mrs. Moose
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Walt Starr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-10-03 09:21 AM
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4. Whistle Ass jumped the shark
The Aircraft Carrier landing was Dubya's "Jumping of the Shark", and somebody (I don't recall the exact screen name) on DU made just that prediction.

Rove has run out of new plots for the series and they still have like 15 months to try and carry the story through.
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Plaid Adder Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-10-03 06:37 PM
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8. Yes, I remember the use of the term
At the time I was not so optimistic...but that was definitely the moment at which Bush cleared the dorsal fin. The rest is details.

15 months to go and all out of story lines...sounds like Enterprise!

C ya,

The Plaid Adder
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StClone Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-10-03 09:28 AM
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5. Has Rove Outsmarted himself
Rove is not the all knowing genius that I have suspected him to be. Bush gave Rove free reign to keep Bush in power and it is not going well. It's gone from meltdown to ballistic as people find how Bush's NeoCon flying monkies, under Rove's cover, deceived them. Rove has overplayed his hand.
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HFishbine Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-10-03 09:32 AM
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6. Great
analyis Adder. Our story is one that America loves, that of the underdog. Against seemingly impossible odds. We marched. We pointed out the truth that, in the context of the offical story, made us seem like nuts, but which is now proving to have been correct. We railed against a myopic media which is now having to give credence to our views to repair its credibility.

We were shouted down, told to shut up, called unpatriotic, spat upon, boycotted and vilified. But, we were right. It is a classic tale. But the telling is not up to us. We must continue our character role rather than become the narrator. We must complete the final act which is the ascension to power.
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Kolesar Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Sep-10-03 12:28 PM
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7. That was rather insightful
I never visualized the antiwar crowd as playing a character role. In the last scene, the protagonist finally gets back up to deliver the knockdown.
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