so........... bush* is a poet??? try this:

nostamj

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Sat Oct-04-03 10:11 PM
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so........... bush* is a poet??? try this:

The lies are not white.
The blood is bright red.
Bush ‘brings on’ the fight--
Your children are dead.

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WindRavenX

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Sat Oct-04-03 10:13 PM
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1. Uh oh..

Edited on Sat Oct-04-03 10:14 PM by WindRavenX

Somewhere in Washington, Bush's brain just exploded.
Wait. He needs a brain to explode first.... :think:

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karlschneider

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Sat Oct-04-03 10:17 PM
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2. Decent poetry, excellent commentary.

It just occurred to me, those lines would fit the music of the "star spangled banner".

Inserted at "and the rocket's red glare..."

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nostamj

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Sat Oct-04-03 10:20 PM
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3. thanks KS

my 'real' poetry (and lyrics) are a bit more sophisticated (I hope)

this was deliberate 'doggeral' in form but (hopefully) a stiletto in content

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