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TheReligiousLeft (647 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 01:32 PM Original message |
Help me cut down my Democratic National Convention speech! What do I cut? |
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neuvocat (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 01:40 PM Response to Original message |
1. Lets see... |
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gristy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:03 PM Response to Reply #1 |
2. Chris's original is good. This one is excellent |
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TheReligiousLeft (647 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:09 PM Response to Reply #1 |
3. Does His her work in speeches. Anti-Gender speech |
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neuvocat (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:20 PM Response to Reply #3 |
5. I know what you mean. |
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TheReligiousLeft (647 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:21 PM Response to Reply #5 |
6. Hmmm.... Does anyone else have any suggestions? |
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Lydia Leftcoast (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 04:51 PM Response to Reply #6 |
21. "Elevation" can't really "outnumber" anything |
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kentuck (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:25 PM Response to Reply #1 |
7. Is this correct? |
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TheReligiousLeft (647 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:27 PM Response to Reply #7 |
8. I had are to start with |
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neuvocat (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:42 PM Response to Reply #8 |
15. Maybe some more gender neutral terms |
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Tinoire (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 03:03 PM Response to Reply #1 |
18. Jeez- between the 2 of you, that is excellent. |
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TheReligiousLeft (647 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:16 PM Response to Original message |
4. Come on, more responces please KICK |
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grasswire (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:28 PM Response to Original message |
9. an old editor takes a whack |
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TheReligiousLeft (647 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:31 PM Response to Reply #9 |
10. Wow! That is pretty good |
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grasswire (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:33 PM Response to Reply #10 |
11. that's what editors do |
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TheReligiousLeft (647 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:37 PM Response to Reply #11 |
12. Sweet. What are you an editor of |
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grasswire (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:49 PM Response to Reply #12 |
16. everything |
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grasswire (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 04:29 PM Response to Reply #12 |
20. here's the technique |
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lostnfound (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Nov-09-03 02:33 AM Response to Reply #9 |
26. Republican man says its okay to kick dust in the eyes of those below n/t |
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Cleita (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:40 PM Response to Original message |
13. Cut out all the extra words and rewrite some of the |
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TheReligiousLeft (647 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 02:41 PM Response to Reply #13 |
14. Thank you |
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TreasonousBastard (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 03:01 PM Response to Original message |
17. Here's another stab at it. |
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loudsue (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 03:42 PM Response to Reply #17 |
19. That's reeeeeel good!! Takes the best of all suggestions, |
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elperromagico (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 05:14 PM Response to Original message |
22. Let's see |
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elperromagico (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 05:21 PM Response to Reply #22 |
23. If all else fails |
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TheReligiousLeft (647 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 06:41 PM Response to Original message |
24. Wow, thanks for your suggestions |
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elperromagico (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat Nov-08-03 07:00 PM Response to Reply #24 |
25. That's great |
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The White Rose (804 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Nov-09-03 04:54 AM Response to Original message |
27. See how this works for you. |
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