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cestpaspossible (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 05:32 PM Original message |
critique my sappy song |
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Madrone (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 05:41 PM Response to Original message |
1. I like it.... |
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cestpaspossible (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 05:51 PM Response to Reply #1 |
3. Yeah I tried to come up with a line to replace it |
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Madrone (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 05:58 PM Response to Reply #3 |
5. How about - |
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auntAgonist (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 05:53 PM Response to Reply #1 |
4. thinking ..... |
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Madrone (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 05:59 PM Response to Reply #4 |
6. Good call! :) |
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cestpaspossible (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 06:04 PM Response to Reply #4 |
8. well |
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auntAgonist (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 06:09 PM Response to Reply #8 |
9. I sure don't think it's a bad line .. and.... |
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cestpaspossible (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 06:13 PM Response to Reply #9 |
10. I like it but |
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Madrone (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 06:23 PM Response to Reply #8 |
11. ???? |
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nuxvomica (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 07:17 PM Response to Reply #8 |
12. Maybe you should go a different way with the mountain metaphor |
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Droopy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 05:45 PM Response to Original message |
2. Pretty good |
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Chicago Democrat (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 06:00 PM Response to Original message |
7. I like the punk version |
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cestpaspossible (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-21-05 07:46 PM Response to Reply #7 |
13. Is there another version? |
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