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Melodybe Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:41 AM
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I'm having self esteem issues, can I get some lounge love?
Edited on Thu Jul-28-05 01:46 AM by Melodybe
I'm currently writing my first screenplay and although I usually don't have self esteem issues, the idea of having to eventually talk to Hollywood executives is getting me nervous.

Other than all the dem work I'm doing, the creative side of me decided to write a screenplay. It's formulaic, it got pirates, corrupt churches, magical crystals, mind control, propoganda, fencing, fighting, true love and you could slap it on a lunchbox. Plus it has a few choice Hitler and Bush quotes and even parts of a Chaplin monologue, but I don't know I'm just starting the thrid and final Act and I'm psyching myself out.

Would you watch this movie?

Plus no DUers have a crush on me and it made me sad :(
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Wetzelbill Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:47 AM
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1. I'd watch it
I've written and made some stuff, short films etc. If you want some critiquing feel free to pm me and we'll figure something out.

But that's cool that you're writing it. I'm working on a screenplay too, the author gave me permission to adapt it from his novel before he died. :)
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Melodybe Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:53 AM
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6. Cool, that's awesome!
Edited on Thu Jul-28-05 02:01 AM by Melodybe
While I am an avid activist, my first love was films. I could make more money if I became a writer. Although I suffer from dyslexia and grammer hates me, I have stories to tell.

Oddly I never even considered writing until I saw the movie Pirates of the Caribean, I just thought to myself there is a better pirate movie out there and then wham the whole story came to me at once, in one big chunk, now I have about ten complete stories littering my brain. As if politics wasn't enough!

I'll be glad to send you the finished product, any critiques would rule.

Congrats on getting the book deal, that just rules!
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Wetzelbill Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 02:00 AM
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15. I love film too
I have a video production degree. Directed a music video before too.

Yeah, the book deal was more or less a handshake thing. Nothing official, but I can get the rights and all that pretty easy and everything I'm sure.

Politics has overwhelmed me since 9-11, so I haven't done as much artistic stuff since. :)
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Melodybe Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:47 AM
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2. Is there no love cause I usually post in GD?
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Floogeldy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:47 AM
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3. Are you really going to get it to Hollywood executives?
That's awesome!

I started a screenplay last weekend, myself.

Go for it!

:)
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Melodybe Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:55 AM
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8. Well my Aunt has 2 kids with Wes Craven, and her husband is in the music
industry, if anything I'm going to send it to her son Jonathan (Wes' son) and beg that he helps me find an agent.
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Floogeldy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:56 AM
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9. I loved "Cursed"
:)
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radwriter0555 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:49 AM
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4. Well, just make sure you have a beginning, a middle and an end... and make
it FUN!

Write it with actors in mind and make the dialogue FUN!

Writing is hard, keep us captivated, is all we ask.
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Melodybe Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:59 AM
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14. Funny that you say that, I considered going into casting during
my first year in college, I was in theatre and casting is a gift of mine. I called Elijah Wood for Frodo when he was about 14 and I told my hubby when we read the book together that Sam would have to be played by someone like Sean Astin. Called Ewan as Obi Wan too, my friends still bitch that I never went into it.

But in reponse to your post, I most definitely have actors in mind! Casting first makes it so much easier to write different characters.

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enigmatic Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:52 AM
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5. I'd watch it
as long as Tom Cruise wasn't in it!:evilgrin:

And don't worry about the crush stuff; there are admirers for everybody out there, and i'm sure you have more than your share:)
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:54 AM
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7. My dear Melodybe!
Of COURSE you can have some Lounge love! C'mere, here's a hug and kiss just for you...:hug: :* I'm so sorry you didn't get into the thread on who has a crush on you...we tend to respond to people we really know, and if you're mostly not here, then we don't know you as well...I'm really sorry...

It is completely natural to be nervous! These are important people, and they have some control over what happens to your script. Of course you're nervous! I'd sure as heck be nervous as well...

I would certainly watch your movie! Sounds like a lot of fun, IMHO! Now you just come on over here anytime you need us, and if I'm around, I'll help out...

HOpe you feel better now...

:hi:
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Tallison Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:56 AM
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10. Oh, sweetie
Edited on Thu Jul-28-05 01:58 AM by Tallison
Here's love. :hug:

Creative writing is a tough industry. Most never succeed with their first effort, while commercial success is never necessarily indicative of quality or talent in any case. Write from your heart, write about what you know, write what you'd like to read, then whatever happens, you've already distilled art from your being, the quality of which is constant, not subject to others' evaluation. Chances are there is an audience out there for you, although reaching it can be the biggest logistical challenge in the creative industry. Try not to let that distract you during the creative process.

And one thing from experience: I'm a far better rewriter than a writer. Often I'll write garbage, and only after the 5th editing will it begin to resemble anything like the work I originally intended. Keep the faith and keep writing!
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MrScorpio Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:57 AM
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11. Sounds like a special effects masterpiece
Bring it on
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Heidi Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:57 AM
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12. Melodybe . . .
Don't be sad; you don't need a DU crush to validate you, gf. And don't worry about the future beyond finishing Act III. I'd watch it, even if it didn't _have_ a third act.

Here, have a hug: :grouphug:
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NMMNG Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 01:59 AM
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13. It sounds just odd enough for me to watch
Just don't forget to throw in a flamboyantly gay hairdresser ;)

BTW, have a hug:grouphug:
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Melodybe Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 02:04 AM
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17. No flameboy hair dresser but I do have the ambiguously gay couple
Edited on Thu Jul-28-05 02:06 AM by Melodybe
Although, I just know that executives would turn them into hetero lifemates, while I write it, they are as in love with eachother as 2 side characters can be.
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Wetzelbill Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 02:01 AM
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16. Wait, I kinda have one on you
:) You knocked me for a loop a few times with those impassioned posts. :: swoon ::
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Melodybe Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 02:06 AM
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18. Thanks
:blush:
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Wetzelbill Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 02:11 AM
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19. Scoooooooooore!
:)
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Melodybe Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 02:15 AM
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20. you're cute, if I wasn't happily married I'd flirt more.
Edited on Thu Jul-28-05 02:48 AM by Melodybe
Either way, I still think that you rock.

And I actually blushed.
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Wetzelbill Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 02:21 AM
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21. well, if I wasn't a total loner
I'd flirt more. Wait, that don't make sense.

Glad I made you blush, I hope though, I made you feel good about yourself. You rock too, I love your passion and you're a really nice person from what I can tell. :)
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Melodybe Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 02:39 AM
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22. Well, I hope that you knock Janeane off her feet, she's a lucky girl
Edited on Thu Jul-28-05 02:48 AM by Melodybe
I do feel much better, so thanks all of y'all. I appreciate the love!

I don't know, I have this inate felling that writing screenplays is my calling, I think it's gonna happen. I hate fakeo Hollywood types, actors annoy the piss out of me, when I wanted to go into casting the idea that I would have to work with them day in and day out made me give up the idea of going into casting. But writing is different, I can do it from home, I can tell the producers who I had in mind when I wrote the screenplay, and it is the most literary of the jobs you can have in Hollywood.

I have this weird picture in my mind of walking into the execs office in a cute, tailored black suit, with a black Johnny cash t-shirt underneath. You know the one where Johnny is giving the finger to the camera. It's just uncanny, it came to me when the whole screenplay idea did.

I figure I have may not have a foot in the door, but I do have a toe that most don't have, so since I have nothing to lose, I might as well give it a shot.

Plus with the crap that they are coming out with now, it looks like Hollywood is having a shortage of fresh writers, so maybe they need me.

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Wetzelbill Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 02:52 AM
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23. Ha!
Funny Janeane comment. Nearly made me choke on my pizza, haha. :0

Yeah do your thing and give it your best. Most writing in Hollywood has been godawful, so it won't hurt for you to give it a go. Good luck. :)
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AtomicKitten Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 03:11 AM
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24. Only if It Has Johnny Depp In It


Aarrggh!
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Wetzelbill Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 04:02 AM
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25. Self-delete
Edited on Thu Jul-28-05 04:04 AM by Wetzelbill
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Wetzelbill Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jul-28-05 04:03 AM
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26. Hell I'm not even gay and I maybe would do Johnny.....
wait... pretend I didn't say that. :)

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