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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 08:22 AM
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Friday Poem of the Day - If You Forget Me
If You Forget Me

I want you to know
one thing.

You know how this is:
if I look
at the crystal moon, at the red branch
of the slow autumn at my window,
if I touch
near the fire
the impalpable ash
or the wrinkled body of the log,
everything carries me to you,
as if everything that exists,
aromas, light, metals,
were little boats
that sail
toward those isles of yours that wait for me.

Well, now,
if little by little you stop loving me
I shall stop loving you little by little.

If suddenly
you forget me
do not look for me,
for I shall already have forgotten you.

If you think it long and mad,
the wind of banners
that passes through my life,
and you decide
to leave me at the shore
of the heart where I have roots,
remember
that on that day,
at that hour,
I shall lift my arms
and my roots will set off
to seek another land.

But
if each day,
each hour,
you feel that you are destined for me
with implacable sweetness,
if each day a flower
climbs up to your lips to seek me,
ah my love, ah my own,
in me all that fire is repeated,
in me nothing is extinguished or forgotten,
my love feeds on your love, beloved,
and as long as you live it will be in your arms
without leaving mine.

Pablo Neruda

Hope these beautiful words make your Friday a more beautiful day!

:hi:

RL
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In_The_Wind Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 08:31 AM
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1. True love is never forgotten.
Thank you for posting this very beautiful poem.


:thumbsup:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 09:44 AM
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2. You're most welcome...
Will try to keep up a poem-a-day...

:hi:

RL
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 09:59 AM
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3. that is good stuff
thanks for posting it....I am enjoying your poem-a-day threads :)
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bicentennial_baby Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 10:00 AM
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4. do you pick all of my favorite poems, or what?!
amazing, you are... :)

:hug:
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progmom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 10:07 AM
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5. funny - i was thinking the same thing
:hi:
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bicentennial_baby Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 10:08 AM
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6. hey hey sweetie!!
how are you today? :hi:

i'm sitting here at the sniffa residence, attempting to motivate myself to the shower... :)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 10:31 AM
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7. I would think being there would be motivation enough!
:D

RL
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bicentennial_baby Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 10:38 AM
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10. hehe...yes
mrs. sniffa and i are cleaned and dressed, ready to begin our day of fun and loooove :loveya:
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progmom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 10:42 AM
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11. i'm doing very well!
sounds like you are too! :bounce: :D
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bicentennial_baby Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 10:42 AM
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12. wonderful to hear that!!
and yes, i am blissful, as i am every weekend, lately :)

:loveya:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 10:33 AM
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8. Yeah, I am pretty amazing.
and I've stopped trying to convince others who don't see it and just enjoy those who do.

:hug:

RL
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bicentennial_baby Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 10:37 AM
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9. sounds like a damn good plan!
:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 11:28 AM
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15. Working for me so far...
:hug:

Do you have a clone? :D

RL
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bicentennial_baby Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 01:32 PM
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17. awwww, sorry sweetie...
but if i did, i'd soooo give her your number :D

:loveya:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 01:49 PM
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18. I appreciate that...
In the mean time, well, you know... :D

:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 11:02 AM
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13. My dear RetroLounge....
I don't know where you find these.......

But oh baby, keep 'em coming!

Another wonderful poem.......

I thank you, for all the good and beauty you bring into the Lounge...


:loveya: :hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 11:27 AM
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14. Ah, Peggy, it's already beautiful because you are here.
I just try to add more to it...

:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 11:30 AM
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16. Awww...
YOu are too much, my dear RL.......

Words fail me.....

:loveya:
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khashka Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 01:56 PM
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19. Neruda is always a good choice... but a little Sylvia Plath...
Mad Girl's Love Song

I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

The stars go waltzing out in blue and red,
And arbitrary blackness gallops in:
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.

I dreamed that you bewitched me into bed
And sung me moon-struck, kissed me quite insane.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

God topples from the sky, hell's fires fade:
Exit seraphim and Satan's men:
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.

I fancied you'd return the way you said,
But I grow old and I forget your name.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

I should have loved a thunderbird instead;
At least when spring comes they roar back again.
I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)

Khash.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 01:58 PM
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20. She's on the list for me to post, of course
Only doing one a day, so it will stretch out a while.

"I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead.
(I think I made you up inside my head.)"

RL
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khashka Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 03:01 PM
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22. Well...
I was avoiding DU and got caught up on a poetry website where everyone was trying to analyze that one. And it's one of my favourites: "I should have loved a thunderbird instead"

Here's another (Erica Jong)



Here should be a picture of my favourite apple.
It is also a nude & bottle.
It is also a landscape.
There are no such things as still lives.


Khash.

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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 04:32 PM
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24. Yes, I've always liked that one too!
:hi:

RL
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bicentennial_baby Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 01:59 PM
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21. stop it! you people are in my brain!!!
seriously, is it bicentennial_baby's favorite poems week around here? *swoon*

:)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 04:31 PM
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23. Just keep your eyes open.
Might be some new ones coming that will join your favorites list :D

RL
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Callalily Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-18-05 07:40 PM
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25. Whew!
For a while there I thought I missed your poem of the day. Another great one RetroLounge, thanks for posting these. This one is making me swoon but the Margaret Atwood is still giving me chills.
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khashka Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-19-05 01:51 PM
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26. Which Margaret Atwood? I missed it.
Not the

We fit together like a hook and eye
A fishhook in my eye

(badly paraphrased, but it's stuck with me for years)

Khash.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-19-05 02:43 PM
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27. This Margaret Atwood
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khashka Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-19-05 02:57 PM
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28. WOW!
I would like to be that unnoticed
& that necessary.


Gotta admit, the girl is brilliant and haunting....

Khash.
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Callalily Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-19-05 03:23 PM
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29. No, No, No . . .
Variations on the Word "Sleep" - My favorite line . . .
"I would like to be the air
that inhabits you for a moment
only. I would like to be that unnoticed
and that necessary."
Now you've done it. I've got to go take another shower!:rofl:
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RevCheesehead Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-19-05 03:25 PM
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30. How could I ever forget you?
:loveya::loveya::loveya:
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