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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 08:02 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Fri 12/16/05)
When First We Faced, And Touching Showed

When first we faced, and touching showed
How well we knew the early moves,
Behind the moonlight and the frost,
The excitement and the gratitude,
There stood how much our meeting owed
To other meetings, other loves.

The decades of a different life
That opened past your inch-close eyes
Belonged to others, lavished, lost;
Nor could I hold you hard enough
To call my years of hunger-strife
Back for your mouth to colonise.

Admitted: and the pain is real.
But when did love not try to change
The world back to itself--no cost,
No past, no people else at all--
Only what meeting made us feel,
So new, and gentle-sharp, and strange?

Philip Larkin

**************************************

:pals: :hi: :hug:

RL
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In_The_Wind Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 08:09 AM
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1. I remember the feeling of my Lover's first kiss.
The tenderness of his first embrace that's still there every time we touch.

I'm very grateful that he is all that he is.
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Callalily Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 09:01 AM
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2. Ah, the thrill of
a new love. Best feeling in the world. Makes one dizzy.
Thanks RL for the reminder.
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swimboy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 09:23 AM
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3. silent, effortless negotiation
inch-close eyes

:sighing:

Thank you, RL, once again! :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 09:49 AM
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4. Yes, sighing indeed.
"for your mouth to colonise..."

that one made me exhale...

:hi:

RL
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LaraMN Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 09:55 AM
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5. Isn't it something
how in that stage of a relationship all the senses function so sharply? No wonder so many beautiful words are written about romantic love. It's a fleeting beast.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 11:52 AM
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7. all the senses function so sharply
and then they dull with routine and boredom...

or do they?

:shrug:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 11:35 AM
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6. Wow, my dear RetroLounge...
Oh boy, this one really hits the spot.....it is so true!

It is beautiful.......

Thank you


:loveya: :hug: :pals:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 12:37 PM
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8. Thanks!
:hi:

RL
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RevCheesehead Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 12:43 PM
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9. *deep sigh*
You post this, the day after the proposed Milwaukee meet-up thread...
:loveya:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 01:19 PM
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10. Yeah, well, any excuse to see or talk to you...
:hug: :loveya: :spank:

RL
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SeattleGirl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 04:54 PM
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11. This one is so beautiful, RL
Gave me goosebumps and had me sighing at the same time. :loveya: :hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 07:14 PM
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12. Yes, it is that kind of writing.
I wish I was 1/2 that good :D

RL
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SeattleGirl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-16-05 07:15 PM
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13. Well, you are very good at picking pieces to post
I really do appreciate your posts, and look forward to the daily poem every day. :hug:
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