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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 07:04 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Fri 2/17/06)
Dark Corner

Say, how’d you find me?
Ordinarily, I act deaf and dumb, but with you
It’s different. Darting in and out
Of doorways, prowling after me
Like a black cat.

Just look at the suckers, I kept
Shouting at the world. It was no use.
They just stepped over me holding on to their hats,
Or lifting their skirts a little
On the way to hell.

He must be crazy, sprawled there
On the sidewalk, his fly unzipped,
His eyes closing. Only you came back
To see how I’m doing,
Only you peeked into every dark corner.

I’m a bird fluttering in flight.
Find me a nice, large cage with the door open.
Back me out of here with your kisses.
My shoes need laces.
My pants need your finger to hold them up.

Charles Simic

*****************

RL

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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 10:52 AM
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1. Oh my
another black cat poem. ;)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 12:07 PM
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3. My favorite line...
"Back me out of here with your kisses."

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 12:55 PM
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5. I much prefer the line about pants
but I never was very good with my hands.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 01:39 PM
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6. Must resist all comments...
:D

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 01:41 PM
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7. Aw come on
we have to get a poetry thread locked someday. ;)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 02:03 PM
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8. Get a poetry thread locked?
Bite your tongue. Or let me do it...

:hi:

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 03:04 PM
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9. Oh sugar
You are just too good to me. :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 03:26 PM
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10. I do what I can...
and try what I haven't yet...

:hi:

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 03:34 PM
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11. I don't suppose that's a long list
Need any help crossing things off? ;)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 04:43 PM
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13. Could always use a hand
or something...

:evilgrin:

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 08:14 PM
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18. Or something...
And on lounge theme night...and my birthday. ;)
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 10:59 AM
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2. the good samaritan of love.
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cassandra uprising Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 12:46 PM
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4. A nice send off for a Friday.
:hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 04:25 PM
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12. Don't ask me how, my dear RetroLounge.......
but this one I can really relate to! I don't know why exactly.....

But it does resonate with me.....

Maybe I was male in a previous life? Who knows.....

Anyway, it is beautiful, as always!

Thank you

:loveya: :hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 04:43 PM
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14. Glad you like it!
:hi:

RL
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threehensandacow Donating Member (104 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 06:58 PM
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15. lovely poem
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 06:58 PM
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16. Welcome back!
Missed you...

:loveya:

RL
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threehensandacow Donating Member (104 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Feb-17-06 07:00 PM
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17. thanks
it's been a terrible few weeks. haven't been online. and lots and lots of physical, emotional, and mental changes. missed you as well.
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