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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-06-06 11:00 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Thu 4/6/06)
Birches

When I see birches bend to left and right
Across the lines of straighter darker trees,
I like to think some boy's been swinging them.
But swinging doesn't bend them down to stay.
Ice-storms do that. Often you must have seen them
Loaded with ice a sunny winter morning
After a rain. They click upon themselves
As the breeze rises, and turn many-coloured
As the stir cracks and crazes their enamel.
Soon the sun's warmth makes them shed crystal shells
Shattering and avalanching on the snow-crust
Such heaps of broken glass to sweep away
You'd think the inner dome of heaven had fallen.
They are dragged to the withered bracken by the load,
And they seem not to break; though once they are bowed
So low for long, they never right themselves:
You may see their trunks arching in the woods
Years afterwards, trailing their leaves on the ground,
Like girls on hands and knees that throw their hair
Before them over their heads to dry in the sun.
But I was going to say when Truth broke in
With all her matter-of-fact about the ice-storm,
I should prefer to have some boy bend them
As he went out and in to fetch the cows--
Some boy too far from town to learn baseball,
Whose only play was what he found himself,
Summer or winter, and could play alone.
One by one he subdued his father's trees
By riding them down over and over again
Until he took the stiffness out of them,
And not one but hung limp, not one was left
For him to conquer. He learned all there was
To learn about not launching out too soon
And so not carrying the tree away
Clear to the ground. He always kept his poise
To the top branches, climbing carefully
With the same pains you use to fill a cup
Up to the brim, and even above the brim.
Then he flung outward, feet first, with a swish,
Kicking his way down through the air to the ground.
So was I once myself a swinger of birches.
And so I dream of going back to be.
It's when I'm weary of considerations,
And life is too much like a pathless wood
Where your face burns and tickles with the cobwebs
Broken across it, and one eye is weeping
From a twig's having lashed across it open.
I'd like to get away from earth awhile
And then come back to it and begin over.
May no fate willfully misunderstand me
And half grant what I wish and snatch me away
Not to return. Earth's the right place for love:
I don't know where it's likely to go better.
I'd like to go by climbing a birch tree
And climb black branches up a snow-white trunk
Toward heaven, till the tree could bear no more,
But dipped its top and set me down again.
That would be good both going and coming back.
One could do worse than be a swinger of birches.

Robert Frost

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RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-06-06 11:04 AM
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1. Hmmm
That's not about trees at all, is it? ;)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-06-06 12:27 PM
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2. ...
:D

RL
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yvr girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-06-06 01:46 PM
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3. That doesn't happen to trees in this part of the world
People are another matter though, aren't they?

:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-06-06 04:58 PM
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5. Yes they are...
:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-06-06 02:32 PM
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4. What a lovely metaphor this is.........
My dear RetroLounge.....

For sex......

How it (and he) turns me on......

Beautiful.....

I thank you for posting this.......


:loveya: :hug:
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RevCheesehead Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-06-06 05:04 PM
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6. I love birch trees.
We had one in the front yard at home, and I have one here in the front yard of the parsonage.

I think it's a perfect poem about birch trees. And if y'all are seeing something else in it, I think you've got dirty minds. :P

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-06-06 05:07 PM
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7. Ah, my dear Rev......How right you are!
And......You DON'T?

C'mon.....you're human too!

:loveya: :hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-06-06 05:10 PM
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8. I think you are both over-sexed and have dirty minds
Don't ever change!

:rofl:

RL
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