I've made a political satire blog, is it funny?

TastyArmageddon

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Thu Dec-18-03 05:52 AM
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I've made a political satire blog, is it funny?

Here's the link: http://dylanholly.typepad.com/

I started it several hours ago and so far I've got two posts up. This is pretty much my first attempt at political satire.

Basically the site features a couple new, fake, and hopefully funny political stories every day. I need some feedback though, so honestly, are the first two stories funny or atleast mildly entertaining?

I'm not looking for hits, just honest criticism. Thanks.

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KissMyAsscroft

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Thu Dec-18-03 05:54 AM
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1. Yeah!

Its funny stuff.

Honestly!

And Im a total dick when it comes to criticism so you know Im being honest!

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OldEurope

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Thu Dec-18-03 06:38 AM
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2. Yes.

Where can I buy this calendar?
:D

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soupkitchen

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Thu Dec-18-03 07:46 AM
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3. So far so very good

I'm nit-picking here but,
I think the calendar idea is as good as anything on the Onion.
But I think the outsourcing item, while also a very funny concepet, could use a re-write. Bush should "think" something different than it is a good idea. I'm only bantering concepts here, but how about something like: Bush thinks it's a good idea as long as he still gets to use Air Force One. Or Bush thinks it's a good idea because Karl Rove has told him it will show the American people he is serious about bringing modern corporate efficienalites to government.
Again I don't mean to be negative. I think you're off to a very good start.

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TastyArmageddon

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Thu Dec-18-03 04:44 PM
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4. thank you

Thank you all for the feedback, I'll take it into account.

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TastyArmageddon

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Fri Dec-19-03 03:01 AM
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5. Bump

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