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begin_within Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:11 PM
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Post your favorite very short poem
Here are two examples:

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Ring of Bone (aka "I Saw Myself") by Lew Welch


I saw myself
a ring of bone
in the clear stream
of all of it

and vowed
always to be open to it
that all of it
might flow through

and then heard
"ring of bone" where
ring is what a

bell does



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"Fog"
by Carl Sandburg


The fog comes
on little cat feet.
 
It sits looking
over harbor and city
on silent haunches
and then moves on.
 
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cwydro Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:14 PM
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1. I like the frog poem
is it Dickinson?

How dreary to be Someone
How public, like a bog,
To tell your name the livelong day
To an admiring bog.

I don't think that is exactly it, but something like it....
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Cygnusx2112 Donating Member (214 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:14 PM
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2. Don't know who wrote it...
"God in His wisdom made the fly
And then forgot to tell us why."
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:15 PM
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3. Mine and it sucks
White feathery flakes fall
Like a snowstorm in summertime




I told you it sucks but I remember it every time those white weed/tree/ thingies fly around. I have no clue what they are but it looks like snow in the middle of summer.
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khashka Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:25 PM
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13. It does NOT suck
It's quite beautiful....

Here's mine. I wrote it for Peggy:

I have spent my entire life
trying to give an eye for wisdom
and all along
you had an eye for beauty


Khash.
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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:15 PM
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4. I call this one "Fleas"
Fleas

Adam had'em
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Truebrit71sbruv Donating Member (890 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:17 PM
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5. Said...
... Hamlet to Ophelia,
I'll write an ode to thee,
What pencil should I use?
2B or not 2B?

Spike Milligan
Trumpeter, novelist, poet, comic-genius and Goon
Buried under a gravestone that reads "See, I TOLD you I was I'll"
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idgiehkt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:17 PM
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6. "I want, I want" by Sylvia Plath


Open-mouthed, the baby god
Immense, bald, though baby-headed,
Cried out for the mother's dug.
The dry volcanoes cracked and spit,

Sand abraded the milkless lip.
Cried then for father's blood
Who set wasp, wolf and shark to work,
Engineered the gannet's beak.

Dry-eyed, the inveterate patriarch
Raised his men of skin and bone,
Barbs on the crown of gilded wire,
Thorns on the bloody-rose stem.
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:17 PM
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7. ee cummings
love is a place
& through this place of
love move
(with brightness of peace)
all places

yes is a world
& in this world of
yes live
(skilfully curled)
all worlds

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idgiehkt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:21 PM
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8. god he was such a freaking genius.
thanks for posting that.
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:23 PM
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10. You're welcome
He was. Thanks for the Plath upthread. :hi:
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:22 PM
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9. Love, love, love
e.e. cummings

:thumbsup:

which is why i seldom capitalize
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:24 PM
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11. I seldom capitalize
because I'm lazy. :D :hi:
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Truebrit71sbruv Donating Member (890 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:27 PM
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14. well... this is DU...
... capitalism (of the rampant variety)... is not always welcomed...
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:27 PM
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15. sigh...
I think I love you. :D
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Truebrit71sbruv Donating Member (890 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:35 PM
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17. and we've only just met...
... damn... I'm good...

:evilgrin:
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 05:23 PM
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25. i concur
:loveya:
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anarch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:24 PM
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12. how about "The Red Wheelbarrow"?
by William Carlos Williams:

so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens.



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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 07:48 PM
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31. i love that one...
here sits work
waiting...

and isn't life
a wondrous thing?

in the waiting
and
in the happening
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mainegreen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:33 PM
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16. Always liked this one:
So live, that when thy summons comes to join
The innumerable caravan, that moves
To the pale realms of shade, where each shall take
His chamber in the silent halls of death,
Thou go not, like the quarry-slave at night,
Scourged to his dungeon, but sustain’d and sooth’d
By an unfaltering trust, approach thy grave,
Like one who wraps the drapery of his couch
About him, and lies down to pleasant dreams.
“Thanatopsis.”

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idgiehkt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:40 PM
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19. wow, I haven't heard that in years and years
Edited on Tue Oct-24-06 03:45 PM by idgiehkt
thanks so much for reminding me of it.

I think I'll have to name something Thanatopsis one day, it would make a cool name for a fish or a cat or something
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EFerrari Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:36 PM
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18. Margaret Atwood:
We fit together like a hook and eye
A fish hook, an open eye.
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pscot Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:40 PM
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20. Tiger, tiger burning brright
TIGER, tiger, burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?

In what distant deeps or skies 5
Burnt the fire of thine eyes?
On what wings dare he aspire?
What the hand dare seize the fire?

And what shoulder and what art
Could twist the sinews of thy heart? 10
And when thy heart began to beat,
What dread hand and what dread feet?

What the hammer? what the chain?
In what furnace was thy brain?
What the anvil? What dread grasp 15
Dare its deadly terrors clasp?

When the stars threw down their spears,
And water'd heaven with their tears,
Did He smile His work to see?
Did He who made the lamb make thee? 20

Tiger, tiger, burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?

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southpaw Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:51 PM
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21. This one is a concise distillation of Naturalism
A man said to the Universe: "Sir, I exist!"
"However," replied the Universe,
"the fact has not created in me a sense of obligation."
-- Stephen Crane
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EFerrari Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 04:40 PM
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22. Nature red in tooth and claw -- with an attitude.
lol
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otherlander Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 04:42 PM
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23. There's this one:
I love you, but why must you love the law?
'Tis plain for all to see that she's a whore
who virtuous men have no need to woo;
who villains screw, then studiously ignore.

It's from V for Vendetta, when he's making all the computers malfunction. Then there's my attempt at haiku:

golden chessboards lay
in grasses weaving, weaving
webs to catch the rain
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Arugula Latte Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 05:21 PM
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24. Candy is dandy/But liquor is quicker -- Ogden Nash.
;)
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The Velveteen Ocelot Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 05:27 PM
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26. When called upon by a panther,/Don't anther. - Ogden Nash
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Kutjara Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 05:28 PM
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27. Fleas
Adam
Had 'em.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 05:29 PM
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28. Here's one of mine:
Nimbus

What is this gray cloud?

I stare at the mirror

It radiates out from my face

A silvery gray cloud

Am I holy?

Hardly


:shrug:
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begin_within Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 06:51 PM
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29. How about this one by Emily Dickinson
Some keep the Sabbath going to Church –
I keep it, staying at Home –
With a Bobolink for a Chorister –
And an Orchard, for a Dome –

Some keep the Sabbath in Surplice –
I just wear my Wings
And instead of tolling the Bell for Church,
Our little Sexton – sings.

God preaches, a noted Clergyman –
And the sermon is never long,
So instead of getting to Heaven, at last –
I’m going, all along.
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KamaAina Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 07:43 PM
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30. Ode to Gee Dubya Bush, by KamaAina
Roses are red, violets are blue,
Your immoral war sucks, and so do you.

Violets are blue, roses are red,
You lied to us then, and now thousands are dead.
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mitchum Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 07:51 PM
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32. Spalding Gray...
Walked away

by me
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