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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 12:48 AM
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***A Poem***
Long have I lived

And long have I loved

You

You have taken my heart

Where have you gone with it?

You won’t let me love you

The way I want

Give me back my heart

Now

I don’t care if it’s broken……

I just want it back

I need to be free with it again……

Never mind my tears

They mean nothing…..

Just give me back my heart please…

And I will surrender yours……

So our paths may diverge………

I’m not crying damn it……

Now, let me go……

Please

No, don’t put your arms around me

You know I can’t resist your touch……

What do you mean, kiss me?



Ah! What a marvelous kiss!

Perhaps I might stay

After all………

How much I love you……always

:loveya:


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cwydro Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 01:57 PM
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1. That's nice Peg
and reminds me of a year or so ago...so glad I can look back without pain now....
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 03:15 PM
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7. My dear cwydro!
Thanks, sweetie......I'm glad you can look back without pain now, too.... :hug:
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 01:59 PM
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2. break up to make up--
:hi:
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cwydro Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 02:01 PM
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3. You got it girl
very happy to be single, calm and peaceful now.:hi:
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 02:03 PM
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6. good to hear--
:hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 03:17 PM
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8. My dear wildhorses.........
That's where this one went, didn't it?

When I started writing it, I had no idea just where it would end up!

Glad you liked it, sweetie....:hug:
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 04:07 PM
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19. yeah..i thought you were gonna deck 'em one
when i first started reading it ...but, it ended up wuite nicely after all :hug:
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fizzgig Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 02:01 PM
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4. beautiful peggy
thank you for sharing
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 03:19 PM
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10. My dear kagehime..........
Thanks! Really, I've done better.......

But still, I'm so glad you like this!

I love to share with you, after all....:pals:
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 02:03 PM
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5. ......
:cry:

That was beautiful Peggy :loveya:
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cwydro Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 03:18 PM
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9. Hmmm...
makes me wonder what is up in our sweet Peg's life, eh???:evilgrin:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 03:28 PM
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12. You never know, my dear ............
Not all is open to view with me........... ;)
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cwydro Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 03:47 PM
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14. VERY mysterious response.
Things that make you go hmmmm...:evilgrin: :hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 03:51 PM
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16. Indeed........
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cwydro Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 03:54 PM
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17. Oh you!
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 03:22 PM
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11. My dear BarenakedLady.....
Oh, thank you so much, sweetie......

Now, now, no need to cry........Hope you're OK.......:pals:
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 03:45 PM
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13. Oh I'm fine
Just picked a bit at a scab is all. :pals:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 03:50 PM
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15. I understand...........I really do.......
They are hard to stay away from........:pals:
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Broken_Hero Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 04:01 PM
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18. Nice poem Peg...:)
:hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-08-06 04:07 PM
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20. My dear petersond.........
Thanks, sweetie......not my best effort, by a long shot, though......

Glad you enjoyed it today! :hug:
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