The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Fri 5/25/2007)

Reverification of The Senses

She was closing in
all the spaces:
it was what he didn’t say
more than what he did;
he couldn’t even figure.

He allied himself with time,
waiting it out,
She fell into bed with
a woman in a silk man’s suit.

Imagine! she called him back
from his computations:
you’re on a beach-
do you see yourself or
are you you.

He sees a submarine.
She feels a wet leg
slide between hers.

She can’t believe it.

We’re too much alike,
she concludes:
very hypnotisable.

A six year bad trance.
Again, hallucinations.

Hortensia Anderson

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is this about what i think its about?

i like the first 7 lines

and then

i get confused

maybe that is her intent

and what it takes

in the:

Reverification of The Senses

or not....

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