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romantico (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:36 AM Original message |
I Need Help Writing a Sex Scene |
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soleft (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:38 AM Response to Original message |
1. Are you shooting it? Directing/Producing? |
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romantico (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:48 AM Response to Reply #1 |
5. Yeah, I'm directing |
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soleft (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:12 AM Response to Reply #5 |
22. Have you cast it yet? A lot will depend on your actors |
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romantico (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:18 AM Response to Reply #22 |
26. I have not cast it yet |
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soleft (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 10:00 AM Response to Reply #26 |
46. LOGO has a series that features only short films |
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Tyler Durden (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:40 AM Response to Original message |
2. Sex scenes are becoming pretty cliche. |
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mzteris (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:10 AM Response to Reply #2 |
18. I'm with you. |
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Left Is Write (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:14 AM Response to Reply #2 |
23. I agree with this. |
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DS1 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:41 AM Response to Original message |
3. Focus on the penis |
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In_The_Wind (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:46 AM Response to Original message |
4. Try substituting some of your erotic memories for "they make love". |
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SarahB (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:50 AM Response to Reply #4 |
7. What she said. |
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In_The_Wind (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 11:04 AM Response to Reply #7 |
53. If that doesn't work, he could insert his fantasies. |
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flvegan (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:48 AM Response to Original message |
6. 3 words: Full frontal nudity |
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NewJeffCT (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:04 AM Response to Reply #6 |
15. and |
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flvegan (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:07 AM Response to Reply #15 |
16. and |
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Hugin (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:50 AM Response to Original message |
8. Retro is cool... Cut to some fireworks, blooming flowers, race cars, and end with a open pit... |
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mzteris (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:11 AM Response to Reply #8 |
20. I thought you were suggesting that RetrouLounge |
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Hugin (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:17 AM Response to Reply #20 |
25. No in this case I was thinking of how to symbolically represent the act of which the OP refers... |
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kay1864 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:30 AM Response to Reply #25 |
32. RetroLounge has readily available stock footage? |
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mzteris (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 11:03 AM Response to Reply #32 |
52. but of course |
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mzteris (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 11:02 AM Response to Reply #25 |
51. I dunno - RL can probably still help out there. |
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Hugin (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 12:55 PM Response to Reply #51 |
55. And Bees pollinating flowers! |
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LeftyMom (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:50 AM Response to Original message |
9. Show them leaning in for a kiss, and then pan up to a sky full of fireworks |
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Hugin (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:52 AM Response to Reply #9 |
10. Separate bed rooms or at least twin beds... |
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LeftyMom (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:11 AM Response to Reply #10 |
19. Nobody ever watches at the Drive-In Den-Of-Iniquity anyhow. |
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Hugin (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:23 AM Response to Reply #19 |
29. Well, there's always a market among the Gawdless Hell-bound Infidels... |
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matcom (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:52 AM Response to Original message |
11. "... as his arm slithered further and further into the horse's vaginal cavity....." |
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Hugin (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:54 AM Response to Reply #11 |
12. Dear Penthouse Forum... |
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LeftyMom (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 08:54 AM Response to Reply #11 |
13. Go Directly to Hell. Do Not Pass Go, Do Not Collect $200. |
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matcom (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:01 AM Response to Reply #13 |
14. "..... Mr. Ed's bodice was glistening........." |
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slj0101 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:08 AM Response to Reply #14 |
17. "Ohhh, Willlburr! Take me! Take me!" He neighed softly. |
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NewJeffCT (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:11 AM Response to Reply #17 |
21. "Oh My God!" |
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pagerbear (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:16 AM Response to Original message |
24. Tell us about the characters. |
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romantico (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:24 AM Response to Reply #24 |
30. They are in their mid twenties |
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Schema Thing (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 10:18 AM Response to Reply #30 |
50. "She is swwet..." |
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Guava Jelly (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:19 AM Response to Original message |
27. I got it |
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Hugin (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:22 AM Response to Reply #27 |
28. "rugged yet gentle hands" |
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Blue_Tires (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:29 AM Response to Original message |
31. dig up a paperback copy of "Best of Penthouse Letters" |
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kay1864 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:32 AM Response to Reply #31 |
34. Fiction? FICTION?? |
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Blue_Tires (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 10:35 PM Response to Reply #34 |
59. well, |
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LaraMN (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:32 AM Response to Original message |
33. I think you pretty much HAVE to use the word "throbbing." |
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matcom (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:33 AM Response to Reply #33 |
35. like your tongue when in the presence of the Midas guy? |
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LaraMN (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:36 AM Response to Reply #35 |
36. *sigh* |
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matcom (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:37 AM Response to Reply #36 |
37. oh that is at LEAST an 'over the bra' |
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LaraMN (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:44 AM Response to Reply #37 |
41. Maybe I'll make hubby bring it in. |
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Orrex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:38 AM Response to Reply #36 |
38. Start by asking the mechanic if he or she is good with lube |
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kay1864 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:41 AM Response to Reply #38 |
39. Ooh, "Lara and the Hot Female Mechanic" |
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LaraMN (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:45 AM Response to Reply #39 |
43. No! |
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kay1864 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 10:02 AM Response to Reply #43 |
47. Yes! |
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Name removed (0 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:42 AM Response to Original message |
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Wetzelbill (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:44 AM Response to Original message |
42. I've never directed one |
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Wetzelbill (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:48 AM Response to Original message |
44. get lots of input from your actors too |
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romantico (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 09:56 AM Response to Reply #44 |
45. I am |
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mzteris (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 11:11 AM Response to Reply #45 |
54. why so gungho to show |
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dembotoz (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 01:04 PM Response to Reply #54 |
56. i agree less is more |
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davsand (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 01:45 PM Response to Reply #44 |
58. "Input" would be the general idea, I think. |
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Tyrone Slothrop (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 10:13 AM Response to Original message |
48. I also dabble in the writing of screenplays |
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Schema Thing (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 10:16 AM Response to Original message |
49. Take a look at Monster's Ball |
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ghostsofgiants (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 01:38 PM Response to Original message |
57. If you want to see how a good sex scene is done, watch Y Tu Mama Tambien. |
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Generic Brad (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 10:37 PM Response to Original message |
60. Here's a wild suggestion |
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MilesColtrane (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-13-07 10:57 PM Response to Original message |
61. It's all about the set up. |
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