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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-13-07 02:04 PM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poem Thread, 8/13/07
"Season for Bearing"

I used to hold my breath
ten counts—wish I may,
wish I might—then will

my release to that first star
or dandelion sphere—
full moon bursting.

Once I tossed a penny
into a lilly pond,
watched it spiral down

and leave a wake of widening o's...
my cervix dilating too soon.
The doctor's voice bears down

through the receiver:
it makes no difference
if I stay in bed or not,

it makes no difference
if I slow my breaths,
it makes no difference

if I sip green tea,
or cross my legs,
or stand on my head.

I let the cord unwind
as constellations gather
to fill the hollows

in late summer's sky:
Cassiopeia mounts her throne,
Andromeda rises.

—Nancy Naomi Carlson
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Dragonbreathp9d Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-13-07 02:22 PM
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1. pretty imagery!
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-13-07 02:31 PM
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2. Nice! nt
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-13-07 03:05 PM
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3. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-13-07 05:06 PM
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4. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-13-07 06:29 PM
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5. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-13-07 07:47 PM
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6. Kick. Also, I repeat my request for PMs from tech-heads around here
who would like to volunteer to help me sort out some formatting issues I'm having with the poems. Thanks in advance.
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I Have A Dream Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Aug-14-07 06:15 AM
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12. Thanks, BI! n/t
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-13-07 10:40 PM
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7. Kick.
'Cause you know you want it.
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SeattleGirl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-13-07 10:44 PM
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8. Nice one, BI!
Thank you again for doing a poetry thread.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-13-07 10:48 PM
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10. Sure thing!
We're switching gears a little, re: subject matter, tomorrow.
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idgiehkt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-13-07 10:45 PM
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9. that is really peaceful
and it places me right in the moment. Thanks. :hi:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-13-07 10:48 PM
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11. There is kinda a peaceful quality to it, now that you mention it.
Thanks for reading!
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