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Perseid Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-16-07 11:02 PM
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Midnight Poetry Thread
Edited on Tue Oct-16-07 11:03 PM by Perseid
the cigarette didn't come easily from my lips
and I still find it interesting to move
my hips
but think that tomorrow is waiting for me
more than I'm waiting
for tomorrow
I don't care
I still think
and still care
a cigarette didn't do
anything yet
other than you
I wait
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Perseid Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-16-07 11:08 PM
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1. I will smash you if you don't write some poetic words
just sayin'
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-16-07 11:20 PM
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2. Some poetic words
Well, You asked for it. ;)
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Perseid Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-16-07 11:22 PM
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3. bootiful!
just too bootiful!
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-16-07 11:26 PM
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4. How very seasonal of you to notice
"spooken" like a true gentlemen :)
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Perseid Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-16-07 11:35 PM
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5. I got a bag of rocks
yep
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-17-07 12:02 AM
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7. poor Charlie Brown
~sigh~
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Perseid Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-16-07 11:42 PM
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6. it's gone now
Edited on Tue Oct-16-07 11:45 PM by Perseid
I like to turn an ear to
what I hear
but
it's gone now
and it was
gone long ago
while your walking out the door
I heard the same things you said before
how
I heard you ask how
I might miss you
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Oct-17-07 12:08 AM
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8. Here's one of mine, my dear Perseid...
His words reach out

They wrap around me

They hold me close

They touch my heart

They walk across my soul forever

I gasp at them

And my heart rejoices



:hug:
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