Poem about love, for inchworm - Democratic Underground

UndertheOcean

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Thu Jan-03-08 02:51 AM
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Poem about love, for inchworm

The World , my love

To be disenchanted with the world,
is to know it for the first time.
A moment of imperfect epiphany,
a recollection of what has always been,
yet is no more.

To be enchanted with the world,
is to swim between its waves,
drowning under every crest,
yet still coming up for air.

To be outside the world yet still within it,
that my love,
is another world ,
which may save this one.

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Inchworm

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Thu Jan-03-08 03:04 AM
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1. The werld my love

to pull you
and take you to me
ancient is our love
lasting til now
passions of old
in my pants I raise

The werld a sucky ball
whose waves are in dirt
I fill you with my face
a face of beaten eggs

pilgrim and this
just may take the stain out of your shirt

..tired of thinkin :)

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UndertheOcean

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Thu Jan-03-08 03:08 AM
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2. hmmm

:rofl:

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Inchworm

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Thu Jan-03-08 03:10 AM
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3. wtf kinda critique is...

:rofl:

:silly:

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UndertheOcean

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Thu Jan-03-08 03:12 AM
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4. I am sorry but this got me ==>

"passions of old"
"in my pants I raise"

:rofl:

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Inchworm

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Thu Jan-03-08 03:14 AM
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5. why would you fall for such juvinile things?

:yoiks:

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