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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-04-08 08:06 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Fri 1/4/2008)
Near Heron Lake

During the night, horses passed close
to our parked van. Inside I woke cold
under the sleeping bag, hearing their heavy sway,
the gravel harsh under their hooves as they moved off
down the bank to the river. You slept on,
though maybe in your dream you felt them enter
our life just long enough to cause that slight
stirring, a small spasm in your limbs and then
a sigh so quiet, so close to being nothing
but the next breath, I could believe you never guessed
how those huge animals broke out of the dark and came
toward us. Or how afraid I was before I understood
what they were--only horses, not anything
that would hurt us. The next morning
I watched you at the edge of the river
washing your face, your bare chest beaded with bright water,
and knew how much we needed this,
the day ahead with its calm lake
we would swim in, naked, able to touch again.
You were so beautiful. And I thought
the marriage might never end.

Kim Addonizio

********************************

:hi:

RL
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Inchworm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-04-08 09:09 AM
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1. loverly
To lay with a love

Even though it uses that dreaded "M" word. :D

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-04-08 06:11 PM
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4. dreaded "M" word
:D

:hi:

RL
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hisownpetard Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-04-08 11:09 PM
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7. Yeah, she had to go and ruin everything.
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-04-08 09:44 AM
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2. nice imagery --
:donut: :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-04-08 09:53 PM
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5. yes...
:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-04-08 02:07 PM
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3. My dear Retro!
How very beautiful and vivid this is...

And the hidden meaning too...

About the marriage...

Just stunning!

Thank you...:hug:
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LynzM Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jan-04-08 10:03 PM
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6. Very vivid, and makes me uncomfortable.
Trust is a hard one for me... that poem pushes some button of mine, for sure. Thanks for sharing it.
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