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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Mar-24-08 06:00 PM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 3/24/08
Edited on Mon Mar-24-08 06:01 PM by BlueIris
"Sonogram"

Something of desk work and pornography,
through succulences of conducting gel.
Vector: creation (in partial view),

held in the half-dark of the examination room,
just as a wishbone of base mineral
holds pomegranate seed or emerald

or alveolus in a narthex rose.
God’s image lies crouched safe in blood and matter,
where an ionic snow falls lightly, hushed

into the deep calm of the body's gulf.
The channel-changer skates...tiny hot springs
of the beating heart, or sinuses of thought

like Siracusa's limestone quarries, where
an army of seven thousand starved to death.
The world of line and measure somewhat darkly

honors you in this glass, child: all your hands
will make, all your body will savor,
your mind consider, or your heart regret,

seeking your whole life for such immanence.

—Karl Kirchwey
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Mar-24-08 07:45 PM
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1. Oh, come on. This is great.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Mar-24-08 07:46 PM
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2. Sweet!
Thanks...

RL
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Mar-24-08 07:48 PM
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3. That's what I say.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-25-08 12:33 AM
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4. Kick.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-25-08 12:37 AM
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5. My dear BlueIris...
This is very nice!

I wish I could write like this...

Alas, not yet!

Come see my poem...

Thank you...

:hug:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-25-08 01:26 AM
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6. Thanks, C-Peg!
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Mar-25-08 05:56 AM
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7. Kick.
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