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The Straight Story Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-21-08 12:36 AM
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A poem in Honor of California Peggy's poem
Here is hers:
http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=view_all&address=105x7852862

For Peggy (got my own style of poems, so bear with me please)

He sat there alone in the bottom of the mine shaft
A hole he helped to dig, in hopes of finding something

And today, as he dug for his gold
It collapsed in on him

In the darkness he sat, and lit a smoke
The light from his match was a welcome, yet brief, comfort.

From his pants he withdrew a flask, this may be my last he thought
As the embers from his smoke brought a brief light into the darkness

God willing I will emerge from this place
A better man

My kids have seen me in a darkness not far from what I am in now
Depression and alcohol enveloping me as does this damned dark

If I emerge from this cocoon of death I pray thee Lord
To let me become the man I always should have been

I risked it all for dreams of something more
When all along I had it right there in front of me

I drowned all the pain over feeling I was a bad man with booze
When all along it was the booze that kept me from feeling them and life

I crawled into this deep hole hoping each day to come out a better person
When really to those that needed me most I was loved for just who I was. Me.

Near death he finally passed out in that hole, his oxygen running low
until finally they reached him and pulled him out of that place into sunlight

And like the worm who becomes a butterfly he spread out his arms
And then held his kids. His wife.

He finally learned to fly
When the man he was died

And he became the man he always wanted to be
When he saw the man he was

He looked back then at where he had been
And realized that it was not where he ended up that mattered

It was the journey.
It was the flying with you in this life that made me free

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jun-21-08 12:42 AM
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1. My dear Straight Story...
I am truly honored by your poem...

This is terrific!

Yes, your style is nothing like mine, but who says it should be?

Your message is right on!

I love your last line...

It was the flying with you in this life that made me free

Thank you, my good friend...

:hug:
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