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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Aug-08-08 07:11 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Fri 8/8/2008)
Ars Poetica Harmonica

Call me aerophone. Call me free-reed.
I am the song's honey-comb:
on nostalgia's star-flied, toe-tapped, steamy-screened-
in porch, I bay to your blind uncle's fretting banjo
as magnolias float bandshells of globed, ten-hole notes;

& your dead mother, on dream's phone, pining
as you keep trying, what's wrong?, what's wrong?
I am waking's hung-up-on dial tone, that flat-line
buzz in the blood, & your alarm clock's whooping siren.

Call me diatonic. Call me chromatic.
I am the drunk angel's mouth-harp,
palm-organ in your hand's trembling steeple, each
channel searching the strayed way to your lost god,
tongue-shaped reeds choiring in the wind's church;

& field-psalm for soldiers in gravel's uniform,
my black notes, your flags luffing at taps' half-mast.

Call me tremolo. Tongue-block, finger-sigh, over-bend
into glissando, & call me lickin' stick, tin sandwich,
call me Mississippi sax: drawn, I wheeze an asthmatic's
bluesroom gasp; blown, I am the green-throated hollers
in the broken beer bottles of your trashed adolescence,
fuck's Ohhh baby that kicks holes in your bedroom's sheetrock;

& sucked back: your cheek's swollen wineskins, the bottled walls
of hookah's water-smoke—I am release's lung-punched bliss.
Cured in skin & soul I am, I am the breath in your bones.

Glenn Morazzini

************

:hi:

RL
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Gonzo Gardener Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Aug-08-08 08:00 AM
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1. Right on, Retro!
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Aug-08-08 05:05 PM
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5. ...
:hi:

RL
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YankeyMCC Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Aug-08-08 08:10 AM
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2. Nice nt
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Aug-08-08 06:03 PM
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6. ...
:hi:

RL
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Aug-08-08 08:28 AM
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3. ...
Call me tremolo. Tongue-block, finger-sigh, over-bend
into glissando, & call me lickin' stick, tin sandwich,
call me Mississippi sax: drawn, I wheeze an asthmatic's
bluesroom gasp; blown, I am the green-throated hollers
in the broken beer bottles of your trashed adolescence,
fuck's Ohhh baby that kicks holes in your bedroom's sheetrock;
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Aug-08-08 08:14 PM
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7. fuck's Ohhh baby that kicks holes in your bedroom's sheetrock
:9

RL
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Aug-09-08 01:26 AM
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9. lol -- oh yeah
that rocks.
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blueraven95 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Aug-08-08 08:51 AM
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4. ...
:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Aug-08-08 08:15 PM
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8. hey!
:hi:

RL
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