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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 06:53 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 10/13/2008)
The Emperor's Wife

Belief is everything. Yet I can't describe
his new clothes, pornographic as the wind's touch,
the pale, abandoned ship of his body, empty,
empty as the suggestion of smiles and vows. The
whispering fills my head, light in the terrible room
where we tried unsuccessfully to make children. I
gathered the wreck of him in my arms. Now air
rests its hand against his rough thigh. He is
laughing, waving. The all of him. He is happy
in his strange fidelity of blood swerving around,
avoiding his floating heart, his political games,
the innocence of good food. Moths swarm
in the faces of bystanders who know there is nothing
between them except their acquiescence, the sound of
their breath, their grins loosened like kites.
I too take risks. Not the sun pushing my garments
aside with its warm, broken kisses, my hair uprooted
by a breeze. But the way I stay, watching him caress
the world in its pure nakedness, knowing I
can't stop him from walking out that door.

Laurie Blauner

*********

:hi:

RL
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blueraven95 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 07:01 AM
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1. ...
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 05:17 PM
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9. ...
:hi:

RL
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 09:12 AM
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2. is this a different one from the one you posted last week?
this sounds really familiar :shrug: :donut: :hi:
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 12:31 PM
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4. I've got deja vu, too.
:hi:
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 10:14 PM
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15. it was/is a good poem...
and my short term memory is still pretty good :D :hi:
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 04:01 PM
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5. He must have forgotten to take his ginkgo
:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 05:17 PM
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7. Watch yourself, little missy...
:spank:

RL
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 10:13 PM
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14. He needs help ...
you will volunteer to be his nurse, right :D :hi: ;)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 05:16 PM
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6. I'll be damned...
I just posted this a few days ago...

:blush:

RL
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 10:12 PM
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13. you're kind of cute when you blush like that --
:D :pals: ;)
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YankeyMCC Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 09:16 AM
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3. Hey there nt
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 05:17 PM
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8. Hey
:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 06:34 PM
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10. My dear Retro!
It doesn't matter that you already posted this!

It's still beautiful, sweetie...

Thank you!

:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 06:43 PM
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11. ...
:hug:

RL
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mokawanis Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 07:18 PM
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12. Very moving
The voice of loss and lamentation. That is incredible imagery and mood. I'm going to file this one and visit it again some day.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-13-08 11:20 PM
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16. ...
:hi:

RL
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