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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-15-08 10:10 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 11/15/08
Edited on Sat Nov-15-08 10:15 AM by BlueIris
"Soliloquy for Cassandra"

Here I am, Cassandra.
And this is my city under ashes.
And these are my prophet's staff and ribbons.
And this is my head full of doubts.

It's true, I am triumphant.
My prophetic words burn like fire in the sky.
Only unacknowledged prophets
are privy to such prospects.
Only those who got off on the wrong foot,
whose predictions turned to fact so quickly—
it's as if they'd never lived.

I remember it so clearly—
how people, seeing me, would break off in mid-word.
Laughter died.
Lover's hands unclasped.
Children ran to their mothers.
I didn't even know their short-lived names.
And that song about a little green leaf—
no one ever finished it near me.

I loved them.
But I loved them haughtily.
From heights beyond life.
From the future. Where it's always empty,
and nothing is easier than seeing death.
I'm sorry that my voice was hard.
Look down on yourselves from the stars, I cried,
look down on yourselves from the stars.
They heard me and lowered their eyes.

They lived within life.
Pierced by that great wind.
Condemned.
Trapped from birth in departing bodies.
But in them they bore a moist hope,
a flame fueled by its own flickering.
They really knew what a moment means,
oh any moment, any one at all
before—

It turns out I was right.
But nothing has come of it.
And this is my robe, slightly singed.
And this is my prophet's junk.
And this is my twisted face.
A face that didn't know it could be beautiful.

—Wislawa Szymborska
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-15-08 11:53 AM
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1. My dear BlueIris!
Oh, I like this! Great imagery, great use of words...

Really classical sounding too...

Thank you!

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-15-08 12:01 PM
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2. Nice
It turns out I was right.
But nothing has come of it.
And this is my robe, slightly singed.
And this is my prophet's junk.
And this is my twisted face.
A face that didn't know it could be beautiful.


:hi:

RL
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-15-08 12:49 PM
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4. "But nothing has come of it" has special resonance for me right now. nt
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-15-08 12:49 PM
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3. Funny. I was just reading about the Trojan War
with my son last night.

Timely, too. I think many of us 'round these parts (DU) have a bit of Cassandra in us.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-15-08 05:16 PM
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5. Kick.
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Nov-15-08 07:14 PM
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6. ok...
this one hits close to home. thanks.
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