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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-09-09 05:25 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 4/9/09 (semi-graphic subject; NSFW/minors/survivors)
Edited on Thu Apr-09-09 05:26 AM by BlueIris
"Island of the Raped Women"

There are no paved roads here and all of the goats
are well-behaved. Mornings, beneath thatched shelters,
we paint wide-brimmed straw hats. We paint them
inside and outside. We paint very very fast. Five
hats a morning. We paint very very slow. One hat
a week. All of our hats are beautiful and we all look
beautiful in our hats. Afternoons, we take turns:
mapping baby crabs moving in and out of sand, napping,
baking. We make orange and almond cake. This requires
essence and rind. Whipped cream. Imagination.
We make soft orange cream. This requires juice
of five oranges and juice of one lemon. (Sometimes
we substitute lime for the lemon. This is also good.)
An enamel lined pan. Four egg yolks and four ounces
of sugar. This requires careful straining, constant
stirring, gentle whisking. Watching for things not
to boil. Waiting for things to cool. We are good
at this. We pour our soft orange cream into custard
cups. We serve this with sponge cake. Before
dinner, we ruffle pink sand from one another's hair.
This feels wonderful and we pretend to find the results
interesting. We all eat in moderation and there is no
difficulty swallowing. We go to bed early. (Maybe, we
even turn off lights. Maybe, we even sleep naked. Maybe.)
We all sleep through the night. We wake eager from dreams
filled with blue things and designs for hats.
At breakfast, we make a song, chanting our litany
of so much collected blue. We do not talk of going
back to the world. We talk of something else
sweet to try with the oranges: Sponge custard.
Served with thick cream or perhaps with raspberry sauce.
We paint hats. We paint hats.

~Frances Driscoll
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XemaSab Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-09-09 05:54 AM
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1. May I ask why you felt this poem needed an NSFW warning?
It's a beautiful poem, but sad. :(
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-09-09 05:46 PM
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4. The highly emotional nature of the topic might be considered NSFW to some.
Would've freaked out coworkers at my old job(s), that's for sure.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-09-09 10:48 AM
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2. My dear BlueIris...
Ah, so much is hidden in this one. Very sad, and very beautiful...

Was the title the reason you put up the warning?

Thank you for this poignant work!

:hug:

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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-09-09 05:47 PM
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5. Title, subject matter, speaker's words about subject matter...
In general, I put up warnings on all poems dealing with SA.
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-09-09 10:54 AM
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3. ~
:donut: :hi:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-09-09 05:48 PM
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6. Hi, Tuesday. nt
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