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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-15-09 10:15 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 4/15/09
Edited on Wed Apr-15-09 10:16 AM by BlueIris
"A Circle, A Square, A Triangle and a Ripple of Water"

Sex floated like a moon
over the composition. Home
was transpierced, ego
thrust out of line and
shaded. But sex floated
over the unconscious, pulling it
up like a sea in points to
where she dreamed, rolling
on and on, immaculate, a full moon
or a breast full of milk.
Seemingly untouched she
was the stone at the center of
the pool whose circles
shuddered off around her.

~Jane Cooper
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-15-09 10:34 AM
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1. I am such a critic....
I love it but, I would have taken a different point of view with all of this....Thanks.

It has some lovely imagery.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-15-09 10:38 AM
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2. Jane Cooper is my new favorite. nt
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-15-09 10:41 AM
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3. She has a way with words.
She does set a lovely scene with this one.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-16-09 01:52 AM
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4. My dear BlueIris!
Wow, this one is very interesting!

The imagery is wonderful...

Thank you!

:hug:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Apr-17-09 10:09 AM
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5. Ah, C-Peg.
I can always count on you and Tuesday to give these poems a good once-over.
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