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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-11-09 02:14 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 6/11/09
"Coal"

I
is the total black, being spoken
from the earth's inside.
There are many kinds of open
how a diamond comes into a knot of flame
how sound comes into a word, colored
by who pays what for speaking.

Some words are open like a diamond
on glass windows
singing out within the passing crash of sun
Then there are words like stapled wagers
in a perforated book--buy and sign and tear apart--
and come whatever wills all chances
the stub remains
an ill-pulled tooth with a ragged edge.
Some words live in my throat
breeding like adders. Others know sun
seeking like gypsies over my tongue
to explode through my lips
like young sparrows bursting from shell.
Some words
bedevil me.

Love is a word, another kind of open.
As the diamond comes into a knot of flame
I am Black because I come from the earth's inside
now take my word for jewel in the open light.

~Audre Lorde
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-11-09 02:17 AM
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1. I am just an old chunk of coal
but I am going to be a diamond one day.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-11-09 09:26 AM
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2. ...
:applause:

RL
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-11-09 12:49 PM
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3. Kick. nt
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-11-09 12:56 PM
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4. My dear BlueIris!
Wow, does that ever change how I see coal...

This is wonderful, evocative, breathtaking!

It makes me dream of words I may one day write...

Thank you!

:applause: :applause:
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