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Midlodemocrat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 04:39 PM
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I wrote another poem. Tell me what you think.
The scritching of the manbox made DS1 cry.
His love for matcom, unrequited.
His life not worth living.
Raining, pouring, the tears, they flow.



Tell me what you think. I'm going to write a poem about each of you freaks.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 04:43 PM
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1. My dear Midlo!
Wonderful!

I think the Lounge has another Poet Laureate!


I can't wait to see the one you write about me...;)

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Midlodemocrat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 04:44 PM
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2. I'm just using my creative juices to make fun of DS1.
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flvegan Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 04:45 PM
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3. It doesn't rhyme.
:hide:
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Midlodemocrat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 04:56 PM
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4. Latest one is about you.
:hide:
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Moondog Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 04:58 PM
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5. Your minimalist method
of expression suggests that you might be good at haiku. Really.

Give it a shot.
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Midlodemocrat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 04:59 PM
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6. HAHAHA.
I'm just making fun of DS1. He doesn't read big words well.
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LostinVA Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 05:00 PM
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7. I actually think that one's pretty good
:scared:
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Midlodemocrat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 05:00 PM
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8. No fucking way. It blows.
FLazarus' is good.


:rofl:
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Name removed Donating Member (0 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 05:08 PM
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bicentennial_baby Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 05:09 PM
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10. zOMG
:o
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Midlodemocrat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 05:16 PM
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11. I am going to gank you sooner rather than later, hater.
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jeff30997 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 05:20 PM
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13. Agreed.Gank him ASAP ! Quick ! Watya waitin' for ?
I'm next in line for TM dammit hurry up ! :P
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TZ Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 05:22 PM
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15. You are so evil
:rofl:
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DarkTirade Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 05:16 PM
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12. The syllables are all off for a haiku.
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Midlodemocrat Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 05:21 PM
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14. It's not a haiku, hater. It's a POEM.
:eyes:
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DarkTirade Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 05:30 PM
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16. Well, I don't HATE it...
... I just think it sucks. A lot. :P
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cwydro Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 05:30 PM
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17. I'm never here much during the week
and I posted on the OTHER poem thread and now I see it is locked.

I musta missed something. So let me just say:

IBTL:P
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DS1 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 08:02 PM
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18. Wow, I'm David Letterman!
I should have my own show!
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mainegreen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 08:04 PM
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19. I like the alternate term for ballsack. Very well done.
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Debi Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 08:05 PM
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20. Where's my fucking poem?
Liar :cry:
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AlCzervik Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 08:06 PM
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21. no kidding, where's mine!
i give her rap videos and a muse and what do i get, nothing!
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Shell Beau Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 08:13 PM
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22. I continue to be blown away by your undeniable talent.
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AlCzervik Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-19-09 01:43 AM
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23. nice.
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jeff30997 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-19-09 01:48 AM
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25. Lol!
I just saw your sig line ! Cool ! :)
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AlCzervik Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-19-09 01:51 AM
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26. leftymom wrote and i stole it.
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jeff30997 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-19-09 01:47 AM
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24. Cool !
Emily Dickinsonesque !
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LaraMN Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-19-09 11:46 AM
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27. It's very affecting.
Wield your power with words carefully, Midlo.
Some of us are weak.
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