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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 06:44 PM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 6/17/09
"The Photograph"

All that year
I thought I was twenty-two
till John, on one of his
visits, corrected me:
I was twenty-three.

That was also the year
I started drinking
on a daily basis.
I was still carrying on
about Tom. John
kept trying to convince me
that Tom wasn't worth it,
but it was a hopeless cause.

John also took
lots of pictures of me:
in front of my building
on O'Farrell St.,
on the Sausalito
Ferry, at Fisherman's Wharf.

He snapped this one
in a garden
in Golden Gate Park.
God, I can't believe those bangs!

Or those rose-tinted
sunglasses!
That's the denim jacket
I stole from Tops 'N Trousers
before they fired me
(I rarely showed up).

On the back
of the photograph
I wrote: Me surrounded
by "First Love" roses
,
(our private joke)
Golden Gate Park,
San Francisco,
1976.

~David Trinidad
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 06:56 PM
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1. My dear BlueIris...
I don't really get the point of this one...

Sorry...

:shrug:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 10:04 PM
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2. A nice vignette, turned into a poem.
I like this one because it's one of the few poems I've found about same-sex relationships that depict a normal, non-traumatic experience or experiences. There's more to the lives of GLBT poets than just their sex lives, oppressions and health issues, after all.
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jun-17-09 10:07 PM
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3. wonder how he lost a year.
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