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Lorax7844 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 01:24 AM Original message |
Quick I need grammar help with 2 sentences, it's very important |
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Lorax7844 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 01:27 AM Response to Original message |
1. Also, do you think that this is good enough? |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 01:34 AM Response to Reply #1 |
3. Definitely good enough! |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 01:32 AM Response to Original message |
2. I think those are wonderful! |
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Lorax7844 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 01:35 AM Response to Reply #2 |
5. I know that with all those commas the grammar must be wrong |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 01:36 AM Response to Reply #5 |
7. The commas are fine. |
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Betsy Ross (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 01:34 AM Response to Original message |
4. Lovely. |
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Lorax7844 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 01:36 AM Response to Reply #4 |
6. really? could I make it all one sentence? |
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Lorax7844 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 01:38 AM Response to Reply #6 |
8. One sentence would make it better |
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Lorax7844 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 02:03 AM Response to Reply #8 |
9. how bout now? |
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Oeditpus Rex (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 02:30 AM Response to Reply #9 |
12. Well, if you're one of those Serial Comma freaks... |
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old mark (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 02:17 AM Response to Original message |
10. L7: First sentence is fine except the colon (:) is incorrect I'd just use a dash (-). |
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handmade34 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 02:17 AM Response to Original message |
11. I edit my sons papers all the time and always fear |
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Deep13 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 11:37 AM Response to Original message |
13. good as is. nt |
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Tuesday Afternoon (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 11:44 AM Response to Original message |
14. nice, as is....my version - |
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Lorax7844 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 11:47 AM Response to Reply #14 |
15. that's it |
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Tuesday Afternoon (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 11:51 AM Response to Reply #15 |
16. oh my! You are most welcome... |
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Lorax7844 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 11:57 AM Response to Reply #16 |
17. Thanks this evening will be full of good food |
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gmoney (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 01:03 PM Response to Original message |
18. How can you have lived in 8 states AND 5 countries and only had 6 homes? |
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Lorax7844 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 04:09 PM Response to Reply #18 |
20. visited, we've only lived in 2 towns |
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Ikonoklast (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 01:07 PM Response to Original message |
19. First off, what is a 10th 'weeding' anniversary? |
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Lorax7844 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 04:10 PM Response to Reply #19 |
21. punk it was a typo and by the time I noticed it was too late to change |
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Ikonoklast (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 04:34 PM Response to Reply #21 |
22. Oh, so no sharing, huh? |
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Lorax7844 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 04:35 PM Response to Reply #22 |
23. That's right I'm gonna celebrate all by myself! |
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Ikonoklast (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 04:49 PM Response to Reply #23 |
24. Enjoy your day! |
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pokerfan (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Jul-17-09 04:56 PM Response to Reply #21 |
25. The family that gardens together stays together |
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