My poem "Cold Explosion" along with my audio!

CaliforniaPeggy

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Fri Sep-18-09 07:56 PM
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My poem "Cold Explosion" along with my audio!

Here's the link to the audio:

http://www.fileden.com/files/2009/9/14/2574424/My%20Documents/MP3-Cold%20Explosion.mp3

And here's the poem:

"Cold Explosion"

Up under the watch glass
Of the sky
The white clouds
Are flying

Chased by the west winds
Streaming overhead
They explode over me
Flattened by the wind
Against the glassy dome

The day is dying
And the clouds flee
The coming night

In a cold explosion

� MLC

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Dystopian

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Fri Sep-18-09 08:35 PM
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1. Love it, Peggy...

Once again, thank you for sharing...
Awesome poem...

And I love hearing your voice...the voice of an angel...and passionate in your reading.
What a difference it makes...hearing the poet read her poetry!:hug:

peace~

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Fri Sep-18-09 08:38 PM
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2. My dear Dystopian...

I'm so glad you do...

Ah, I might sound angelic here...

But you wouldn't say so if you heard me when I'm angry!

Luckily, that's rarely the case...

Thank you so much for your very kind comments...

:hug:

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suninvited

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Fri Sep-18-09 09:47 PM
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3. beautiful

thank you for sharing that with us.

:hug:

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Fri Sep-18-09 09:56 PM
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4. My dear suninvited...

I'm so pleased you like this!

It's always my pleasure to share...

Thank you, sweetie...

:hug:

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suninvited

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Fri Sep-18-09 10:11 PM
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5. well, I just have to say

that I am enjoying the audio poems very much !

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Fri Sep-18-09 10:12 PM
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6. You are part of my loyal audience!

And I sure do appreciate you!

It's really fun making them, too...

:hug:

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NYC_SKP

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Fri Sep-18-09 11:46 PM
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7. Sweet!

I find this one fun and whimsical, like these elements of nature have been animated.

The clouds, the day, running away from the night.

Sweet!

:loveya:

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Fri Sep-18-09 11:59 PM
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9. My dear NYC_SKP!

Ah, thank you!

I've actually seen the clouds behave this way, and after years of trying, I finally was able to write it accurately, as well as poetically!

Thank you, sweetie...

:loveya: more!

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NanceGreggs

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Fri Sep-18-09 11:53 PM
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8. I'm so happy you're doing this ...

... I LOVE the sound of your voice - your words, already moving in and of themselves, take on new meaning when spoken by the author herself.

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CaliforniaPeggy

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Sat Sep-19-09 12:02 AM
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10. My dear Nance...

It's funny...I'm having such a good time recording, that my writing is suffering...

Now that everything is fully set up, I want to record all the time!

Your comments are especially meaningful to me...

Thank you so much, sweetie...:hug:

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