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scubadude Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-21-09 03:38 PM
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flower gives
Edited on Sat Feb-21-09 03:41 PM by scubadude

From somewhere

Bee buzzing
crystallized hummingbird

hanging lazy like in warm summer air

dipping back dipping back dipping back
flower gives

off to somewhere

dipping back dipping back dipping back
flower gives

young crying
crystallized hummingbird



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scubadude Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Feb-21-09 09:31 PM
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1. Attemp 2 of Flower Gives


Bee buzzing
resolves into a hummingbird

hanging lazy like in warm summer air

dipping back dipping back dipping back
flower gives

then off to nest

dipping back dipping back dipping back
flower gives

young crying
resolves into hummingbirds
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