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Quixote1818 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:13 PM Original message |
Any suggestions for this letter to the Albuquerque Journal? |
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1932 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:19 PM Response to Original message |
1. I'd add something about how... |
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Quixote1818 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:21 PM Response to Reply #1 |
2. Thanks, I will add that. nt |
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1932 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:25 PM Response to Reply #2 |
4. I'd also change this sentence: |
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Quixote1818 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:27 PM Response to Reply #4 |
7. Good catch! Thanks! nt |
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1932 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:34 PM Response to Reply #2 |
12. Also, fewer words: |
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stonecoldsober (411 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:21 PM Response to Original message |
3. "More scare tacts based on lyes." |
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Quixote1818 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:25 PM Response to Original message |
5. Here is how I have changed it. Hope it's not getting too long |
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razors edge (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:26 PM Response to Original message |
6. mabee |
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Quixote1818 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:32 PM Response to Reply #6 |
10. I am sure John Kerry could understand my letter |
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patrice (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:28 PM Response to Original message |
8. Good clear letter , good lead re FISA courts. . . |
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Eric J in MN (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:29 PM Response to Original message |
9. your letter edited |
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Quixote1818 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:33 PM Response to Reply #9 |
11. That's great! Thank You! nt |
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Eric J in MN (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri Oct-20-06 11:50 PM Response to Reply #11 |
13. You're welcome. NT |
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