Can I get a review of this song I just wrote?

kentuck

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Thu Jan-18-07 03:55 PM
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Can I get a review of this song I just wrote?

:)

I'M A REPUBLICAN, BIG-BUSINESS, CRIMINAL

Gonna get me a job-
And work for Halliburton-
Gonna make a lot of money -
That is for certain.

Gonna break all the rules -
And break all the laws -
Gonna do what I want-
Just be-cause.

(Chorus)
I’m a Republican
Big-Business-
Criminal.

I don’t want my words
to be too
subliminal.

Gonna spit on the homeless-
And laugh at the poor-
Gonna wave my money-
When they knock on my door.
Gonna say that I got mine-
You got to get yours.

(Repeat chorus)
‘Cause I’m a Republican
Big-Business
Criminal

I don’t want my words
to be too
subliminal.

I’m a Republican
Big-Business
Criminal.

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Bluebear

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Thu Jan-18-07 03:56 PM
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1. Quick, copyright it! nt

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BuyingThyme

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Thu Jan-18-07 03:57 PM
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2. :thumbsup:

:thumbsup:

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ayeshahaqqiqa

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Thu Jan-18-07 03:57 PM
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3. I could hear this being sung

with an acoustic guitar by Pete Seegar....no higher praise.....

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kentuck

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Thu Jan-18-07 04:04 PM
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6. Thanks! I just wrote it on acoustic guitar with 3 chords...

Edited on Thu Jan-18-07 04:09 PM by kentuck

I'M A REPUBLICAN, BIG-BUSINESS, CRIMINAL

D-----------------
Gonna get me a job-
----G-------------A----
And work for Halliburton-
D-----------------------
Gonna make a lot of money -
G------------A-----
That is for certain.

and go to "G" on the chorus

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Swamp Rat

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Thu Jan-18-07 03:57 PM
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4. Love it!!!! ... What Bluebear said!!!!

:kick:

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cspanlovr

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Thu Jan-18-07 03:58 PM
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5. Well done! I like it!

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KarenS

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Thu Jan-18-07 04:05 PM
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7. !!

:applause:

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democrank

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Thu Jan-18-07 04:05 PM
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8. All because of you, kentuck.....

I`m sitting here all alone sounding like a 61-year old rapper!

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Parche

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Thu Jan-18-07 04:08 PM
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9. SONG

I am calling Toby Keith right away................ha

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durrrty libby

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Thu Jan-18-07 04:13 PM
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10. Toby might sing it too

I was surprised to learn that Toby is a liberal dem

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Esra Star

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Thu Jan-18-07 05:23 PM
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11. Can you get it onto You Tube.

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