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tinfoilinfor2005 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 03:05 PM
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Another poem from my daughter's friend stationed in Iraq. Heartbreaking.
I and You Sunday, May 06, 2007


I am in hell
Hell is before me, hell is the street I am walking on, hell is the place I currently am
You are in wonderland
Wonderland is far from my obscured view, nice, pleasant, every day a day without a death or the sound of gunfire
I am not doing so well
Hours of sleep this week is the total of five fingers, no thumbs, I am numb, I am beyond being on autopilor
You are doing great
You do not have to wake up suddenly in the night with 537 lifeless faces staring back at you, you see smiles where you are
I am balancing upon the fine line between the downside to life and the pit of deep darkness, I miss my own smile, I miss "me"
You get to walk straight lines, to the left, to the right, you have a clean bill of health, your mind is pure of the blackness
I am walking down a path of darkness
You see the clear path before you
I and you
We should be one


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mnhtnbb Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 03:07 PM
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1. Oh, oh, oh. It is heartbreaking.
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Christa Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 03:09 PM
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2. My heart goes out to him
To all of our brave young men and women there.

:cry:
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tinfoilinfor2005 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 07:39 PM
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7. More of his writings here, with my apologies; someone here at DU
was able to shorten this, but I don't have it bookmarked.

Go to www.opendiary.com and click on search. Put thepoet1 in the search line and his diary will pop up.
Click on follow me to wherever and it will go to his page. The recent posts are on the right. You do not have to
sign up to read his posts. If you want to leave him a note you have to be a member. It is free to be one and then
you can start your own page if you want. If you want to see his earlier posts go to entry ca lander and you can see
all the posts.
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patrice Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 03:13 PM
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3. Please ask your daughter to tell him . . .
We will Never! Ever! Forget!!
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tinfoilinfor2005 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 07:44 PM
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9. Please see post #7 and if you have the time, please write to him.
Sounds to me like he really needs some hope and love. Thanks, patrice! :)
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patrice Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 09:19 PM
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13. Will do.
Thanks for the opportunity to help.
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theguvnorgc Donating Member (109 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 03:23 PM
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4. We must...
Do what is takes to save these kids.
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Karenina Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 03:26 PM
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5. FIRST AND FOREMOST
Those who have not yet been sucked into the maw of the *MIC MUST BE EDUCATED to resist at all costs.
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patrice Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 03:37 PM
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6. Exactly, everything begins with the development of the person, i.e.
Education.

Not forgetting what has been done to these Americans and to innocent Iraqis means that we must commit ourselves to the kinds of Education(s) that will Free people from the f-ing MIC.
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blondeatlast Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 07:43 PM
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8. No words, only tears, and prayers to make the hell end.
God, please help them--somehow.
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Solly Mack Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 08:26 PM
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10. ...
...

k/r
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bonito Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 08:54 PM
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11. To anyone who thinks we need to stay in Iraq
Listen...
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annabanana Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-07-07 08:59 PM
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12. Kicked and recommended. . . People should know. . . .eom
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tinfoilinfor2005 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-08-07 08:49 AM
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14. Yes.
I'd actually like to see it read on CNN and msnbc and printed in the NYTimes and the Washington Post and Newsweek as often as they show pictures of Paris Hilton in the courtroom.
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