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Atticus

(15,124 posts)
Sat Jan 13, 2018, 03:18 PM Jan 2018

And, now for something completely different: a herd of Haiku-----

The sun sets early
and October's evenings wear
woodsmoke as perfume.

A clean sky so blue
my heart aches to behold it---
such is October.

November severs
the last leaves of summer to
wait for the snow.

The grain is golden,
the orchard ripe and laden.
Gorge, for winter looms!

Dry, brown, rattling husks
flung by cold winds down furrows
once ripe; now barren.

As irrelevant
as December's cold sunlight:
till death do us part.

A dandelion
glows between mounds of old snow
and whispers: "Spring!"

None of us relish
the ultimate admission:
we're waiting to die.

Like sepia-tinged
snapshots of our yesterdays,
I'm still relevant.

Hope you find some of these worth reading.

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And, now for something completely different: a herd of Haiku----- (Original Post) Atticus Jan 2018 OP
I love them. Did you write them? MLAA Jan 2018 #1
Guilty. nt Atticus Jan 2018 #2
Nice! You just felt like writing this morning? brush Jan 2018 #3
Just some scratchings from the past several months. My escape. nt Atticus Jan 2018 #4
My own original... Binkie The Clown Jan 2018 #5
That was some response. Atticus Jan 2018 #6
This art is one of the few things cilla4progress Jan 2018 #7
My pleasure. nt Atticus Jan 2018 #8

Binkie The Clown

(7,911 posts)
5. My own original...
Sat Jan 13, 2018, 03:34 PM
Jan 2018

People like Haiku.
Why, I cannot imagine.
It seems too easy.

Face in the window
as the train rushes by me
remembered always.

Now I change my mind.
Haiku can be quite lovely
in a master's hands.

Atticus writes good,
like a Haiku artist should.
I kind of like them.

There was a young lady from Durbin,
who went to bed in a turban.
...


oh wait, wrong genre.

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