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Related: Editorials & Other Articles, Issue Forums, Alliance Forums, Region ForumsI'm gobsmacked by the pain and beauty of this poem for Trayvon
As a poet I have been keeping track of some powerful work coming out of the terrible killing. This one is such a rare and beautiful form, so perfectly suited to the whole incident, that I couldn't resist passing it along.
http://blackspaceblog.com/2013/07/18/no-country-for-black-boys/
targetpractice
(4,919 posts)Can you help me before I ruin it for myself?
nolabear
(41,991 posts)Read the lefthand part all the way through, along with the parts that are centered, in the order that they're there. Then go up to the righthand part and continue, reading only that part and again including the centered parts. Then read all the way across, again including the centered parts. It should all read as a single poem.
The beauty is that the two parts are the two people, and the final runthrough is the union of the two in that last terrible act.
targetpractice
(4,919 posts)Very powerful
this very poem and the contrapuntal structure.
Thanks for opening my eyes to something new.
nolabear
(41,991 posts)I've gotten fond of forms in the past few years. This one's a beaut. And so sad.
SalviaBlue
(2,918 posts)Thanks for posting
nolabear
(41,991 posts)davekriss
(4,627 posts)Thanks for that.
Tree-Hugger
(3,370 posts)Thank you for sharing this.