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NewJeffCT

(56,828 posts)
Tue May 5, 2015, 12:25 PM May 2015

please critique my potential letter to the editor

thanks!

This is what I wrote:
Congratulations to Richard Contrastano of Canton for being able to regurgitate the Rush Limbaugh and Fox News Talking Point of the Week regarding liberal socialist policies leading to problems in Baltimore.

The facts, however, show things to be quite different. Since Ronald Reagan took office in 1981, the economy has been driven by Trickle-Down Economics that features low taxes for the rich, exploding deficits and income inequality and little investment in anything besides the military. Even small attempts to stop Reaganomics, like increases in taxes on the wealthy under Clinton or small investments in infrastructure under Obama has been fought vigorously by Republicans Despite nearly unanimous Republican opposition, both proved extremely good for the economy, though neither slowed down the Supply Side juggernaut.

With 35 years of conservative economic policies in place, the extreme poverty and high unemployment in places like Baltimore are just the natural result of the rich trickling down onto the poor and working class.


The letter I'm responding to:

Today in the United States, looters, rioters and other lawbreakers get away with virtually no consequences, the police are now the suspects and a mom who does what any responsible parent should do (discipline her children) is now the exception rather than the norm. Then we have a "victory rally" to celebrate it all.

If the definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over expecting different results then we as a nation are insane. Fifty plus years of liberal socialist policies are to blame for what's going on in our country. Personal responsibility has now been replaced by the nanny state at every level. Sadly, I expect to see more of the same kinds of things happening in Baltimore and other major cities for this very reason.


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please critique my potential letter to the editor (Original Post) NewJeffCT May 2015 OP
Re-word & shorten second sentence in the second paragraph. Eleanors38 May 2015 #1
second or third? NewJeffCT May 2015 #3
Actually, I was confused by the lack of period before "Despite..." Eleanors38 May 2015 #4
Thanks NewJeffCT May 2015 #5
Thumbs up on your riposte. Baitball Blogger May 2015 #2
Nice job My *personal* response would be LeftinOH May 2015 #6
good point NewJeffCT May 2015 #12
Edit... ScreamingMeemie May 2015 #7
thanks NewJeffCT May 2015 #10
IMO, you sound too "stereotypical liberal". It'll bounce right off him... JHB May 2015 #8
OK NewJeffCT May 2015 #9
I'm back. For your consideration... JHB May 2015 #13
Thanks NewJeffCT May 2015 #14
Replace 'regugritate' with 'parrot'. Unlikely they would publish with regugritate in the text 4139 May 2015 #11

LeftinOH

(5,354 posts)
6. Nice job My *personal* response would be
Tue May 5, 2015, 12:42 PM
May 2015

that the riots are a specific response to a nationwide trend with police departments of shooting (and killing) people who are unarmed, or who could be brought to justice by less than deadly means ..and most of those people happen to be African-American. Beyond that, there is the horrible American penchant for using firearms as a means of conflict resolution. Nothing liberal about that. "Liberal socalist policies" (whever the hell that is) have less to do with the problem than out-of-control police procedures. There is certainly nothing "liberal" about the police actions that have resulted in protests and rioting lately.

Just my 2 cents

NewJeffCT

(56,828 posts)
12. good point
Tue May 5, 2015, 12:53 PM
May 2015

but, if I really wrote about all the problems in Baltimore, and elsewhere, I could fill a rather large book

ScreamingMeemie

(68,918 posts)
7. Edit...
Tue May 5, 2015, 12:43 PM
May 2015

Congratulations to Richard Contrastano of Canton on being able to regurgitate the "Rush Limbaugh and Fox News Talking Point of the Week" regarding liberal-socialist policies leading to problems in Baltimore.

However, the facts show things to be quite different. Since Ronald Reagan took office in 1981, the economy has been driven by Trickle-Down Economics that feature low taxes on the rich, exploding deficits and income inequality with little investment in anything besides the military. Even small attempts to stop Reaganomics, such as increases in taxes on the wealthy under Clinton or small investments in infrastructure under Obama, have been fought vigorously by Republicans. Despite nearly unanimous Republican opposition, both policies proved extremely good for the economy although neither slowed down the Supply Side juggernaut.

With 35 years of conservative economic policies in place, the extreme poverty and high unemployment in places like Baltimore are just the natural result of the rich trickling down onto the poor and working class.

JHB

(37,160 posts)
8. IMO, you sound too "stereotypical liberal". It'll bounce right off him...
Tue May 5, 2015, 12:50 PM
May 2015

...and those like him, and not much to hook in people who can be reached.

If you can wait until this evening I can give a fuller answer, but at this moment I have limited time to check DU, and am rapidly running out of it.

JHB

(37,160 posts)
13. I'm back. For your consideration...
Tue May 5, 2015, 09:06 PM
May 2015

The following is just my opinion, of which you are free to accept, reject, poach from, write off, or otherwise do whatever you see fit.

The reason why I say it sounds "stereotypical liberal" is because you're recapitulating (as the RWers see it) the "it's society's fault" argument, and they've been inoculating themselves against that for those same 50 years. He'll read your letter and take it as a sign that he's completely right: "Tired old arguments from sneering pointy-headed know-it-alls to go with tired old liberal socialist filed policies."

Point #1: never lose sight of who you're writing for, and it's not Sluggo the Talking Point Parrot, or whatever his name is. It's the bystanders who you might actually reach. Plus, every now and again a seed planted in between the cracks of some Sluggo's concrete mindset actually manages to bear fruit.

(his name is Richard Contrastano? Dick Contrastano? Geezuz.... But I digress...)

Point #2: Tell a story, and the story is he's lazy and a chump. And the best stories show, don't tell. Go after his #1 assertion: "liberal socialist policies", and "fifty years plus" of them to boot. Fifty years ago, 1965, was in the thick of the Cold War. Were we "socialists" the whole time? And 50 years of such policies? After 30 years of de-industrialization, union-busting, outsourcing, off-shoring, and elevating "maximizing shareholder value" above all else? Yet somehow, despite 30 years of cuts to those "liberal socialist policies", of "ending welfare as we know it", after cutting taxes on high incomes so much that taxes were more progressive in the Roaring Twenties -- despite all that, despite decades of tax-slashing Republicans and "pro-business" Democrats, somehow "socialism" reigns when a scapegoat is needed! Blaming "socialism" for the unrest in Baltimore isn't "insane", it's just LAZY.

Ditch the sneer and the lecture, and hold him to account for his foolish assumptions. Use his own claims against him.

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