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LiberalArkie

(15,715 posts)
Sat Dec 5, 2015, 11:33 AM Dec 2015

Newspaper style note: Hot enough for you?

By Max Brantley

A careful reader notes an editing difference between an AP story in one paper and the version that appeared in the Arkansas Democrat-Gazette.

From AP's mobile feed:


From the Arkansas Democrat-Gazette:



See the difference?

Four little words — "what some say is"


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http://www.arktimes.com/ArkansasBlog/archives/2015/12/05/newspaper-style-note-hot-enough-for-you
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Newspaper style note: Hot enough for you? (Original Post) LiberalArkie Dec 2015 OP
Well, that's the most pointed difference... Demit Dec 2015 #1
Here is the long form AP article LiberalArkie Dec 2015 #2
Thank you! The AP story expands on the lede so that it makes sense. Demit Dec 2015 #5
The AP version is accurate reporting; the Arkansas Democrat-Gazette is editorializing. Buzz Clik Dec 2015 #3
Dem/Gaz is owned by a very wealthy Republicans the Hussman family LiberalArkie Dec 2015 #4
 

Demit

(11,238 posts)
1. Well, that's the most pointed difference...
Sat Dec 5, 2015, 11:52 AM
Dec 2015

Presumably to mollify their readership? But they also rewrote what the smaller nations said. They changed "could mean" the difference to "is" the difference. But even the original AP story is odd…comparing a life and death question in one situation with a 'what's realistic to do' question in another. It's almost like a non sequitur. Wish I could see more of the context.

 

Demit

(11,238 posts)
5. Thank you! The AP story expands on the lede so that it makes sense.
Sat Dec 5, 2015, 12:51 PM
Dec 2015

Did the Arkansas paper pick up the whole story, or just the bit you show here? I couldn't find it on their site.

I did notice that even AP employed the 'he said she said' of most media stories these days. Which should've satisfied the Arkansas paper…except newspapers know that most readers don't read past the jump, so I guess they wanted to get their slant in there early, at the top.

 

Buzz Clik

(38,437 posts)
3. The AP version is accurate reporting; the Arkansas Democrat-Gazette is editorializing.
Sat Dec 5, 2015, 11:59 AM
Dec 2015

In all likelihood, the Ark version will come true, but at this point it is speculation.

The AP version is absolutely true.

LiberalArkie

(15,715 posts)
4. Dem/Gaz is owned by a very wealthy Republicans the Hussman family
Sat Dec 5, 2015, 12:06 PM
Dec 2015

Some of their more liberal employees were John Robert Starr as Managing Editor and Tucker Carlson as a reporter.

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