I don't like the music and the text flashes by too fast, I'm sure there's more coming. There's just so much bad PR for this guy that I'm sure it was hard to select what to put in this ad.

There might be a more polished version soon. Because it's online at least it's easy to watch again or even freeze it.

exactly. It might squeak by if the text was slower. One must remember that the target audience probably never got to the speed-reading course.
On second thought... you're right: needs another music track.

Too many clips , TV and radio talk shows blast you with a couple minutes of noise before a normal volume of talk starts. Just introduce the show or clip and play it. Plus, slow it down for us people who are not speed readers and like to let the thoughts sink in. While I'm on a rant, why do Americans need loud music all the time? I leave many retail stores if the music is loud.

Excellent work on the video...and quick release. Clinton and her team are doing a great job running the campaign.