Alright, tell them all to go f themselves in your next one!

Could you give me more constructive feedback?

Here is another one I made that purports to be an unbiased Mitt Romney biography song:

It just hurt my ears.

I accept your apology! I'm sorry your ears were hurt.

Apology accepted.

is really bad. The humor has no rationale. Watch a weird al video. He starts a concept and plays it thru. This is like just a mish-mash of stuff.

Exxample: Wearing ears isnt funny, unless its part of an over all concept.


Heres a video I did a couple of years ago for fun, start with a concept and stick with it. Currently I am co-directing a full length horror movie.

Thank you for your tips!

The reason they wear ears is because they are the party mascots. Doug is a Donkey and Salim is an elephant. But I don't think this is clear enough in the video.

Good luck on the horror film! I just graduated USC with a degree in screenwriting. Production is too much work for me! So keep at it! Thanks for your pointers.

standard opening go look up "ask a ninja" on you tube

I made this video almost four years ago: