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Kingofalldems

(38,489 posts)
Thu Oct 10, 2013, 07:18 PM Oct 2013

Any English grammar experts here?

I need some help. Writer of this claims it is grammatically correct:

Judging from @Sufferinglocal's command of the English language, there's only one person he could be. Thomas Jackson.

Can a name be a sentence?

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trof

(54,256 posts)
6. I would terrm this 'style'.
Thu Oct 10, 2013, 07:31 PM
Oct 2013

Sometimes style trumps stodgy grammar.

Elmore Leonard was a master of this.

At first she could not see who it was.
Then the door swung open and in the streetlight she saw him.
Thomas Jackson.

Just my 2 cents.

Art_from_Ark

(27,247 posts)
7. Technically, a sentence needs at least a subject and a verb
Thu Oct 10, 2013, 08:45 PM
Oct 2013

I agree that a colon after "be" would be better punctuation than a period.

Wounded Bear

(58,726 posts)
14. But there are times when one or the other is implied....
Fri Oct 11, 2013, 01:46 PM
Oct 2013

In the Leonard example, the lead in "It was..." is implied, and not stated to increase dramatic effect.

"Shut the door," is another example. In a command sentence, "You" or "You should" is often implied.

Grammar is a tool to be used, not a channel to be followed blindly.

hunter

(38,334 posts)
8. Just write. Worry about the grammar later. Or never.
Thu Oct 10, 2013, 08:52 PM
Oct 2013

Anything important deserves a proofreader, maybe an editor too. (Most written things are not important.)

I laugh at anyone who criticizes my grammar. If they want to fix it, fine, they can fix it. Cut, paste, edit, on their own computer. But please, don't bother telling me about it unless I've asked for your opinion.

Rarely I'll proofread and edit these posts on DU; usually I just let them fly.

If I was always thinking about where to place each foot I'd never be able to walk, much less run. If I thought about grammar then reading and writing would become a chore.

The language I write belongs to me. I own it. I tell the language what to do, it doesn't tell me.



struggle4progress

(118,370 posts)
13. Me is a expert! You is ask: Can a name be a sentence? Me says depending on the name.
Thu Oct 10, 2013, 11:33 PM
Oct 2013

"Sarah Will," for examples, am example dandy sentences what could also being name

CJCRANE

(18,184 posts)
15. Strictly speaking, it depends on the register.
Fri Oct 11, 2013, 01:58 PM
Oct 2013

"In linguistics, a register is a variety of a language used for a particular purpose or in a particular social setting".

So I think the above is okay as an example of colloquial or conversational English.

It's also an example of the concise style of writing found in "hardboiled" fiction.

But I agree with other posters that a colon or dash would be more appropriate. I would probably use an ellipsis...for greater effect!

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