Is there a written description for the position? I would look at any written job description or job posting and try to list how your husband fills all the requirements.

Please feel free to PM me if you feel that you would prefer to talk off the board.

Good luck to you and your husband.

Not bad to mention loyalty but good to put in a sentence emphasing the knowledge he's acquired about the operation over that time.

Don't forget to pRoOfReAd!1!

Good luck.

Working at the hotel for the past nine years has allowed me to under the day to day operations of this particular hotel and this knowledge would allow me to learn the additional responsibilities of Guest Service Manager quicker than a individual who has not work at the hotel before.

But fix the typos!

"I write to you inform you that I am interested in the position of Guest Service Manager. I have been loyal to the hotel for 9 years and believe I would make a good candidate for said position."

It sounds a bit stilted and 'old fashioned'(?).
"I write to inform you that" is superfluous.
An unneeded space filler.

I'd try:

"I am certainly interested in filling the position of Guest Service Manager.
I've been with (hotel name) for nine years and my performance reviews (does he have those?) reflect my dedication and abilities.

When I first came to work here, I didn't look on it as 'just a job'.
It's a career.
I feel qualified to do a good job as GSM and see it as a step up in my career progression.

Thank you for your consideration.

Thank you so much for your help. If I may use your example I will place it in a letter along with a couple other things my husband wants to add. I have also updated his resume for him to give them as well.


Thank you for this help.

I'm always happy to help a fellow DUer.
Makes my day.

This poster is right. Old-fashioned does not cut it these days.

Re: Guest Service Manager


Dear Mr. _______,

I understand from your advertisement in the ____________, dated ________,that you have a requirement for an experienced Guest Service Manager. Enclosed for your perusal and consideration is my resume'.

For more than nine years I have been the ______________ with xyz. My responsibilities included but were not limited to _________,____________,and _____________.

I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss in detail how my experience, education, and background will meet your needs.

I will contact you on____________ to see when and if it would be appropriate for us to meet either by telephone or in person.

Should you require any additional information or clarification, please contact me at__________.

Cordially,

Zzzzzxxxxz

needs. Additionally, modify your resume to mirror their requirement. Good luck.

Any questions, don't hesitate.