TV CAMPAIGN AD: What Do You Think? (please, respond)

I posted this in general, but I think the following also belongs here in Politics. Here's my idea for a campaign ad to refocus in a creative way attention on what was not said and what should have been said in the debate last week. The voice in the ad would say the following:


When it comes to Mitt Romney's plans for America, it's not just about Big Bird.

[font size="3"]It's about Big BURDEN![/font]


The BIG BURDEN that's going to be placed on Americans if Mitt Romney is elected.

• The Big Burden on WOMEN, who will lose control over their own health care decisions.

• The Big Burden on STUDENTS, millions of whom will lose college loans.

• The Big Burden on the MIDDLE CLASS, who will have to bear a $2000 tax increase.

• The Big Burden Burden on THE SICK AND ELDERLY, whose Medicare will be voucherized.


Mitt Romney ... It's Not Just About Big Bird.

It's About The Big Burden His Policies Will Place On Americans (a burden we don't need now that we're back on the right track, having gone from losing 850,000 jobs a month when the president took office, to 31 straight months of private sector growth).



*I enumerated only four examples above just to illustrate how they ad would go. Feel free to add other burdens to the list.